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Dear Ms_Figg,

Since reading the first story that I have stumbled upon, I have faithfully followed your writing ever since until I read every one of your stories. Magnificent!!! I had to be literally detached from my screen sometimes!
What concerns the Dark Lady story, I would love you to make it into a full story as well as pairing Hermione with more than one wizard. Perhaps it would prove to be a pleasant change to see Hermione enjoying herself with both Lucius and Draco as well as Snape (even though I shall always stay a faithful supporter of Savey....)

Hoping to see more of new stories from you,

witch

Wow. This is a great twist. I truly hope you decide to keep working on this piece (I will resort to begging!). I look forward to (hopefully) the future chapters you add to this story.

Thank you,

Vivian Black

You asked for a response. Lets see: You have already established a Hermione with tremendous power, but some flaws in her control. You have established her respect for Severus, and her appreciation of Draco as eye candy. I vote for waiting. Possibly play up her lack of control in bed. Draco would have the job of summoning her bed partner, and of taking away the body the next morning. Can you see blond-and-gorgeous trying to appear NOT SEXY? How would Draco and Severus react to her commanding Lucius to her bed after they've seen her kill all of her previous partners?

This is very different from what you usually write, but for me that is actually an advantage, no offense. You're obviously a very talented writer, but to be honest I find the dominant Snape/submissive Hermione scenario you seem to prefer rather repugnant and I really cannot conceive of Hermione as a massochist. I hope you don't go down that path if you continue this story as I think it has real potential. I've always loved stories where Hermione is extremely powerfull and having all those former Death Eaters as her virtual slaves has fascinating possibilities. Her relationship with Draco would be especially interesting; I would see his attitude to her first being fear and loathing, mixed with reluctant desire, then changing to love and perhaps even worship! That's my view anyway, but it's your story. Best of luck with it if you decide to continue.

I've decided to finish this story, but when I do it...it will be posted only on AFF and not my own website. I will have to move it out of the SS/HG ship area as well because it will involve multiple wizards. Ought to be interesting to write Hermione in the dominant role. She will be "good" however, though good is relative. lol. Kind of looking forward to it. Thanks.

Ruth,

please continue with the story! It has a catching spin to it, it is original. and you write soo good that I devour anything coming from your pen.

I think that this would make a really good story line. Just put it in the threesome or multipul catagoty, or use the brief summary to state that it's primarily HG/SS with bouts of HG/LM & HG/DM with a full summary inside.

I'd be really interested to see this turn into something longer. The multiple partners thing doesn't bother me, as I ship her with Lucius, Draco, and Sev anyway.

Hope you decide to continue.

Hermione with Slytherins? YES PLEASE!!!!!!!!

so i take it not all reviews were +