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November 2, 2006 at 12:00 AM
The story contained no lemons, but was still very, very hot. So many possiblities.
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November 2, 2006 at 12:00 AM
wow what was awesome i love it ... later for now
angel
angel
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November 2, 2006 at 12:00 AM
i loved it... then i checked the writer.. it is you again:))))...
coincidence?? i think NOT!!!
coincidence?? i think NOT!!!
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November 2, 2006 at 12:00 AM
*gurgle* That was wonderful! I would love it if you wrote more, but as a one shot it is good too. Thank you.
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November 2, 2006 at 12:00 AM
God figgy your going to kill me please don't tell me is over please.
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November 2, 2006 at 12:00 AM
I love this story!!! I hope that you will build on it eventually!!!
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November 2, 2006 at 12:00 AM
I love this story! It is awesome!!!! Please continue writing this. I have waited so long to see Hermione be bad and in control...you are awesome!!!
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November 2, 2006 at 12:00 AM
ROFL!!!!!! that is soo cool continue please ???? love this plot line.
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November 2, 2006 at 12:00 AM
very nice. i, honestly, don't think this is such a good one-shot because it can be a great beginning for a great story. i suggest you continue but if you dont, its still well done. =)
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November 2, 2006 at 12:00 AM
Please you have to make a sequa or another chapter. I mean you leave it hanging!