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November 10, 2006 at 12:00 AM
It was different! Hope you update soon!
Slashy Snitch
Slashy Snitch
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November 10, 2006 at 12:00 AM
if u carry on including more torture im well in there to keep on reading hehe
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November 10, 2006 at 12:00 AM
More.. Please, more? Pretty please?
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November 10, 2006 at 12:00 AM
excellent beginning...please continue!
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November 10, 2006 at 12:00 AM
I think you should continue the story. I really like the idea of slave Harry and Dom Draco. I am interested to see where you will take this story.
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November 10, 2006 at 12:00 AM
I liked the first chapter and I want to read more, so update please?^^
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November 10, 2006 at 12:00 AM
it doesn't stink! it smells pretty good! keep going! ;)
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November 10, 2006 at 12:00 AM
Hey, Mekere, more chappies for sure! It does not stink at all, in fact---sniff...sniff...---yeah, I definetely smell roses!
This chapter looks so much better now, just looking at it without reading is nice. Spaces are good and italics give it a nice structure. The storyline itself is pretty captivating. I'd say, we need more.
Good job, Mekere;-)
This chapter looks so much better now, just looking at it without reading is nice. Spaces are good and italics give it a nice structure. The storyline itself is pretty captivating. I'd say, we need more.
Good job, Mekere;-)