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Meow! Harry stalking Draco...hahaha that is too HOT! I shouldn't have read it all, cause now I want to go back and read it all again just to refresh my fuzzy memory of everything...lol Keep up the great work.

i love this story, its amazing.
personaly i really hate dumbledore, he's such an asshole
well anyways i just bought a snake for a pet, a yellow boa, and im trying to think of some good names..
anyways awesome story!

At the end of chapter one: Please get a beta. Trying to make sentences longer by stringing them together with a comma just makes you look like you don't know what you're doing. I'm sure you take pride in your work and would like to show it off to best advantage.

And I'll pass on a tidbit I learned when I was doing research for "No Light Without Shadows"; the Ministry of Magic can tell when and where a spell is cast, and even what spell it was, but it cannot tell who cast it (as evidenced by Harry getting in trouble for Dobby's flying cake in book two). So in an area where a lot of wizards and witches are, a two-year-old could be casting spells, if they were capable and weren't reported, without getting in trouble with the Ministry.

On the other hand, I like your story telling capabilities. If the technical problems were corrected the story would be more enjoyable, but one can see a good story in there anyway.

I finally found you! YAY! OMFG! I am shaking with excitement I am soo happy to admit that I have not felt this way since Black Truth! OH MY FUCKING GOD!!! YAAAAAAAAAY!!!!
wow let me go calm down!

Yup, I liked this chapter. This should be an interesting conversation comping up.

getting used to the aff format. kinda tricky since I only been using ff.net

I am betting on that harry is demon...oh how cool would that be?

Yes. Hello? Dumbledore? Sorry to disturb you old man, but it seems as though you may have lost your alter ego. Name of Krai? Doesn't ring any bells, eh? Strange. Seems entirely like you: manipulative, secretive... No? Ah, well.

Why must everybody end it like that? Just when I thought we where getting somewhere too. I hope you update soon. I don't think I could take the wait. As for a form...I really like wolves. I think that one wouldn't be that bad of a form from how you have describe him so far. Just whatever you do don't make him a snake or any kind of bug. I just can't see that. Well i can see the snake I just think you could come up with something cooler. I see Harry as being a predator. Something that is going to protect his 'mate'.

Damn somtimes I hate you. :) leaving us hanging like that is just sinful esp. since i just got back from a week in the land of lovers USA. urg i wish you would update more often because the story just keeps getting better and better.
waiting impaitently for an update,
VM