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great story so far, but plz update soon i need to know what happens *begging*

Oh my god, I'm actually crying right now. But uh, I want you to know that I think your story is absolutely amazing and you have a real gift for writing. I hope to continue reading more of your work in the future.

I really love your story, the only thing that bothers me more than words could possibly express would have to be your incorrect usage of "you're" and "your". "You're" means "you are", "your" or "yours" expresses posession. I have been waiting for the mistakes to end hoping that somewhere along the line you would have enlisted the help of a beta, or that a helpful review mught have come your way. If you're still unsure of when to use them, just imagine how the sentence ould sound if instead of writing "you're" you wrote "you are" it may help. Either way, I just wanted to point this out in case it hasn't been brought to your attention. Other than that I simply love your story it's absolutely brilliant and your story recommendations have been wonderful as well. Keep up the good work, I'll review again when I'm done reading all that has been posted. I just hate feeling as if I'm saying something completely redundant, or commenting on something that has already been revealed in later chapters. Well, until then.

Oh my goodness... I just read all of this in one go! I have been up and down on this sick little emotional rollercoaster and you make me get off in mid air?! *GASP* How dare you. Lol, well I hope you update soon, I really wish that I could give a valuable critique but my mind is so filled with every bit of material that it would be hard to say anything that would reflect all 42 chapters. So, I will try to leave a decent review next time but at the moment I'm just too...what's the word? Dbvckbefbdefvbreibgviyrbfvyebvhjbfejhbvjdhbfvjd is what it is I think lol. Oh, and I can't believe you're killing off Krai you evil evil woman!!! I can't wait to see what that memory is though so I suppose that my damnable curiosity is shaking me into a callous mode because even as his death saddens me I am forced to acknowledge that the block was not likely to have been lifted anytime soon had it not been for Krai's impending death...hmmm... Well I'm off to ponder such things lol, and in case I haven't said it enough...PLEASE UPDATE SOON!!!

I was so excited when i saw your email in my in box
but I have to admit to having the memory of a gold fish
... I'm going to start reading from the beginning again
^_^ this btw I am excited to do

anyway I'll post again after i finish

ever faithful Serpen

Fantastic story!!! Just stumbled upon it...and I had to read it all in one sitting! FOR THE LOVE OF ALL THAT IS HOLY, WHAT IS THE DAMN MEMORY!? Ok, I'm done. Ive just very excited for your next installment. Also, I love your recomendations. That is so thoughtful!

As much ad i would love to see the whole thing bare bones pleas love your story

Sorry about your loss, hun. Love ya, you know. Great to finally have a chappie to read. Can't wait for the next one. Been having a few probs myself with the eppy to Lies... but I know I'll get it done eventually. Still haven't written that Drarry but you'll be the first to know. xoxoxoxoxo Red..

Soooo need chapter 43!!! Why? Why did he have to die? What does Harry now know?

I just read all 42 chapters all in one go. I must say that i love the plot of the story and can't wait for it to be updated again, i saw many of the stories u suggested i have already read, but i will look up all the others as you have good taste in stories!!! I can't wait to see where the story goes!!