rate_review Reviews

lovely! i adore bottom!snape and you did a fantastic job here!

Severus Snape, former Death Eater, Serpent of Slytherin, Sultan of Snark, on his knees, wand up his ass, holding Harry Potter's hand, declaring with heartfelt sincerity, "I love you; never forget that.." This was priceless!!! You get my vote for what has got to be THE best visual ever!! I loved this story! Touching AND hysterically funny. Excellent job!

Awesome story!!!! Love his gift, i wonder if i could buy one....?

Holy guacomole. And I don't even know how to spell that. Dom!Harry is such a kink, and this story... wow. I cannot express how YUM that was. I'm going to rec it at my dom!Harry site: http://web.mac.com/hazelwolf/iWeb/HazelWolf/List.html, so please tell me if I offend. Or if there's any other stories out there you've written/read that I can add. PLEASE. Um... yeah, I'm gonna go re-read now. Buh-bye!

~Hazel

I feel pretty good about that story. I liked the role reversal of Harry and Snape, there are so many stories that have Snape being the one in control... I must say, this was pretty hot.
I was really impressed with the diction as well.
My only critism would have to be that the layout of the story didn't make a whole lot of sense. It's not so much that it's confusing as it was just... illogical I thought. Maybe a little sporadic as well.
I think that this story does very well as a one shot, and though people are sure to ask you for more, I certainly don't think you should try to write any more of this story (you didn't exactly set yourself up to do so... though, on second thought... I could see you writing something inolving Draco mixing up the pot).
However, you are clearly a very talented writer, and I look forward to reading more of what you write in the future.

Given Lantas preference for slave stories, I thought at first that the scenes in italics would happen after Harrys birthday. The ending was a nice surprise. I can't read enough consensual D/s stories. Sadly, there aren't that many, especially with my favourite subs, Severus or Lucius. I'm all the more happy that you wrote this. You have a great writing style. Perhaps I can challenge you to write a sub!Lucius story? I don't really care about the dominant. Harry or Severus, but Narcissa and Hermione are also fun to read. Think about it!

This was a wonderful read. I look forward to seeing more of your stories in the future.