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for Broken Toy

by eyesemerald

person dm999
schedule February 4, 2007 at 12:00 AM
Ohhh love it!!!!!!

Please bring more of "the old Draco" back, I love those sneak peaks of him.

Ohh and can I say that I vote for Dom!Draco.

Thank you and please post soon!!!

bye
DM
schedule February 3, 2007 at 12:00 AM
Soooo need chapter 10! Must have more!
schedule February 3, 2007 at 12:00 AM
Just loving this so far. Great Draco, not sure what to make of Harry. They both have so much to learn and I am looking forward to every minute they do it. More please soon???
schedule February 3, 2007 at 12:00 AM
I haven't read the other review, so someone may have pointed this out. Don't know if you can go back and correct on this site, but you mentioned your English being a 2nd language. "Get over with it" should by "Get it over with" Love the story and only point this out because you repeat it several times and this is what I think you really mean to say. All else is just perfect the way it is !!!!
schedule February 2, 2007 at 12:00 AM
I am really enjoying this story. Fascinating take on how they got to this place. Now I want to see where they go... Please update soon.
schedule February 2, 2007 at 12:00 AM
Ooh yay, chapter 9! Nice and hot scene with Harry in the shower. Me likes. Can't wait for more!
schedule January 16, 2007 at 12:00 AM
*shakes head sadly* Poor boys! Harry has trust issues and Draco... well... you see.
schedule January 13, 2007 at 12:00 AM
I loved this story, and please contiune with it.
person Jien
schedule January 13, 2007 at 12:00 AM
ooooo~~ then Draco will reply something like, 'that hard-on you got tells me otherwise'...lovely fic honestly. =^.^=
person LoveGD
schedule January 13, 2007 at 12:00 AM
Yikes! Really good chapter, I can't wait to read the next one, please update soon?
And could you email me when you update? My address is girl_best65@hotmail.com
Thanks!
//LoveGD

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