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October 18, 2008 at 12:00 AM
Hot and kinda sad. Very well done.
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November 30, 2006 at 12:00 AM
wow! that was great!
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November 29, 2006 at 12:00 AM
This is the best audlt fan fiction story because it is in keeping with the original story. Bloody brilliant.
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November 29, 2006 at 12:00 AM
ooh...I like this. The chemistry between your Draco and Harry is amazing. Cant wait for more.
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November 29, 2006 at 12:00 AM
I liked the plot, loved it, actually, but the story, while well-written to a point, was not up to my normal standard of excellence.
The sex was written well-enough, and the emotional bit at the end, while fantastic, was out of place.
What would make this fic better would be if you lengthened it just a bit to include the desperation that the light side had to win, and why Harry had to get into Malfoy Manor.
I know it was PWP, doll, but if you wanted that then you shouldn't have started with the whole test-tube bit in the first place.
Hope this helped.
The sex was written well-enough, and the emotional bit at the end, while fantastic, was out of place.
What would make this fic better would be if you lengthened it just a bit to include the desperation that the light side had to win, and why Harry had to get into Malfoy Manor.
I know it was PWP, doll, but if you wanted that then you shouldn't have started with the whole test-tube bit in the first place.
Hope this helped.
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November 28, 2006 at 12:00 AM
wow....hahahaha..that was uh.... that was good. haha, I want more lol.oh man... I like it, i really do lol. please write more!
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November 28, 2006 at 12:00 AM
lol What do you meant THATS IT! lol You have a great oneshot that could be turned into an even GREATER threeshot. I can see this beginning going to many different sequels. Do reconsider bum, this was good stuff!
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November 28, 2006 at 12:00 AM
AH HA! That was certainly different, but I liked it! Great job, write more like this...with more of a plot! That could be cool!
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November 28, 2006 at 12:00 AM
That was absoultly bloody fantastic, I do belive that it is good enough for a sequel, I want to see how Draco recats to how Harry gets into his manor ^_^
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November 28, 2006 at 12:00 AM
He got to fuck Malfoy and save the world, I don't think I'de be complaing to much heheheh