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December 2, 2006 at 12:00 AM
Really good! Keep up the good work, I definately want to read more of this!
//LoveGD
//LoveGD
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November 30, 2006 at 12:00 AM
Interesting, defintiely need to see more.
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November 30, 2006 at 12:00 AM
I like the story line. I hope you update soon
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November 29, 2006 at 12:00 AM
I really like the story so far. I hope you will make Dom Draco/sub Harry.
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November 29, 2006 at 12:00 AM
ch 1 - interesting ideas. I would like to see where you take this.
There are some bad grammar and spelling errors that appear to be the result of a rush. Almost as if it didn't get done fast it might not get done at all. Slow down and take your time - enjoy the process.
There are some bad grammar and spelling errors that appear to be the result of a rush. Almost as if it didn't get done fast it might not get done at all. Slow down and take your time - enjoy the process.
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November 29, 2006 at 12:00 AM
MORE!!! Oh, and Grammar-Nazi says to check your use of the word "too"...
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November 29, 2006 at 12:00 AM
Oh poor Harry and Dudley! What happens in chapter 2?