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by Pheobi

person Angelkitty
schedule December 29, 2006 at 12:00 AM
lovely as usual! that first kiss was so adorible....... and where did Remus learn to train Veela in use of their powers? i know he wandered a lot but it really doesn't seem like a good way to make a living.... i love the idea of the talky thing.... did you have harry give draco a cell phone or the magical equivilant?.... this really is wonderful.....
person amanda
schedule December 29, 2006 at 12:00 AM
hello!! i love your story so far, and hope you finish it. i am hoping ginny is not going to be a backstabing ho to harry, but it is usualy happens in these type of stories. will she? keep going please
person Jena
schedule December 29, 2006 at 12:00 AM
i have to admit that this is confusing on the Dom and sub issue...as a collared submissive myself you have portrayed Draco as a sub and Harry as the Dom, yet you say at the top of the last chapter that it is the other way round. Confused here...
if u know of any sub veela Draco stories let me know...as i am quite fed up of Dom veela Draco ones...but overall i am enjoying this story so ar.
person azlover
schedule December 29, 2006 at 12:00 AM
Wah!!! Luv it!!! So the best Veela yet..... Duz this make me the 51 review? huh?! duz it?! Pleez Post More!!!
person solaris
schedule December 29, 2006 at 12:00 AM
i don't usually like harry/ginny, even if it will become harry/someone-else but i like your story so far. i feel really bad for everyone poor draco falling for attached harry and poor harry and ginny in love but forced apart... i hope harry isn't to bitter and doesn't start blaming draco as it is not his fault. anyway keep up the good work!
person Anja
schedule December 29, 2006 at 12:00 AM
It is magnifisent, i want more!!!!!!!!!!
person ZooArmy
schedule December 29, 2006 at 12:00 AM
Heya!
I really liked the third chapter a lot. (if being a veela is going with all the things you mentioned - I AM SO DEFINITELY AM A VEELA ^^ *cough*wishthinking*cough*) The fourth was, well, don't know...it needed to be, sure. But I have a rather large antipathy against Ginny (don't ask me why, I couldn't answer it in the slightest, it's just like that)
Can't wait for another chapter, because till yet you can coun't me in as a loyal reader. ^^
Would you put me on the mailing list, please?
person thrnbrooke
schedule December 29, 2006 at 12:00 AM
I soooo need chapter 4! Fantastic chapters!
person stef
schedule December 29, 2006 at 12:00 AM
awesome stuff! i normally dont read stories based on songs because the writers have a tendency to be a bit vague but you have a beautiful writing style! Please continue this and soon! ;)
Stef
person Anon
schedule December 28, 2006 at 12:00 AM
great chapter the story is really getting along please post the nect chapter

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