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by Pheobi

person Jojo
schedule December 28, 2006 at 12:00 AM
It is indeed a Draco!veela story with a twist. Qite nice, if I do say so myself... so, continue!
person angelkitty7888
schedule December 28, 2006 at 12:00 AM
oooh.... i'l review 10 times myself if it means that you'll write/post more!!! i [b]love[/b] this! please please please continue *puppy eyes*

i like this story because you are making it flow beautifully, your caracters are showing a true depth and your world seems truly real not just a fiction :) (i had to put at least part of a true review lol)
person becca
schedule December 28, 2006 at 12:00 AM
great so far, can't wait to see where it goes from here!
person arealdeal
schedule December 28, 2006 at 12:00 AM
I like it so far, do not like to be forced to review, I do it when I think it deserves it. As I said before it is a good start, and I would like to see more, just ease off on the review demands and you will probably get plenty, I am a sucker for Veela stories, so am probably hooked already.
person Yukiko
schedule December 28, 2006 at 12:00 AM
wow, I like it so far and I can't wait to read more of it :)

one review less :P
person Galion
schedule December 28, 2006 at 12:00 AM
I'am begining to like your writing style so keep it up, cause you got 1 more loyal reader.
person lyric
schedule December 28, 2006 at 12:00 AM
Love it so far! Hope you have time to update!
HARRY AND DRACO FOREVER!!!
person sak
schedule December 28, 2006 at 12:00 AM
While your story is interesting, I am not fond of authors who refuse to post until her numbers reach a certain point. A writer offers a story in hopes that other people like it as much as she does, not to hold hostage until a "quota" is reached. It's nice to hear how people respond, but the nature of beast is only a fraction do. Either live with it or don't post it. Writing is not a numbers game. It is something you enjoy doing.
person mumstheword
schedule December 28, 2006 at 12:00 AM
simply awesome!
person wizli
schedule December 28, 2006 at 12:00 AM
I loved the chapter, specially the way Harry is trying to understand more about Veelas and their mates but I'm sorry for Draco, all this must be so difficult for him *hugs him*. I missed Ginny's reaction to the whole veela/mate bussiness after Draco's attack, maybe next chapter?.

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