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by Pheobi

person jaimie
schedule December 30, 2006 at 12:00 AM
well...i'm not so happy about the all the time you skipped out on...the struggles to adapt is one of my favourite parts of stories, but i understand that you have to follow the cd as much as possible.
*waiting for the next chapter*
person thrnbrooke
schedule December 30, 2006 at 12:00 AM
Need chapter 5! Why separate them? The elder Malfoys know who his mate is. Where is Harry off to? What happens next?
person vibora
schedule December 30, 2006 at 12:00 AM
cool! cool! cool! i like how you write...with the songs and all. update soon! ^_^
person wizli
schedule December 30, 2006 at 12:00 AM
Wow, that was kind of fast, with the kisses and all but that means the "better" parts are coming closer, right? ^^.
person McChicklet
schedule December 29, 2006 at 12:00 AM
I really like the story. I always wait for another update. Please keep going.
person Angelkitty
schedule December 29, 2006 at 12:00 AM
amazing as per the usual :) i really do feel badly for ginny.... Is she going to try revenge? just curious she seems heartbroken enough to damn the consiquences.... gotta love mates.... i guess lol

Please update soon?
person Anon
schedule December 29, 2006 at 12:00 AM
more please?
person Jaimie
schedule December 29, 2006 at 12:00 AM
okay, here's my review! hopefully you'll reach 51 soon so i can read more!
person soulspeaker
schedule December 29, 2006 at 12:00 AM
I love VeelaDraco! MateHarry! stories...I could do with more story and less song lyrics...I like the story so far though. Keep writing!
person justa_me
schedule December 29, 2006 at 12:00 AM
Great chapter

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