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December 26, 2006 at 12:00 AM
I think that this is one of my favorite X-mas presents. lol. But why did you have to stop it like that. Grrr. I want more PLEASE???? PLEASE!!!! Awesome, better if it kept going!!! I really wanna see what happens!!!!! yea!!! thanks!
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December 25, 2006 at 12:00 AM
Great cliffhanger. Write more soon plz.
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December 25, 2006 at 12:00 AM
This is a good beginning. However, please don't post a chapter consisting of a few paragraphs. That, is not a chapter. It only hints at an author to eager to get reviews. Don't become a review addict.
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December 25, 2006 at 12:00 AM
great chapter im off to read the next!
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December 25, 2006 at 12:00 AM
awww..cliff hanger end to this chapter!i hope you update soon cuz now i really wanna find out what she has to sayto sev and what he does next!!!so please update soon cuz im hooked on this story now ,so update soon!!!oh and though this chapter is small it was still good..so keep up all the great work and update soon!really this fic is great!
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December 21, 2006 at 12:00 AM
@2 awesome story! I hope you update soon!!
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December 21, 2006 at 12:00 AM
I very interesting start!!! I wonder what snape will do! Will he try to take his children away from hermione? Will he try to get hermione back as well? Since when did he know about them? I hope you will update soon!!!
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December 19, 2006 at 12:00 AM
Liked the first two chapters, I would love to read the rest of the story. Please update soon!!!
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December 19, 2006 at 12:00 AM
You must continue the story. Im already really into it and want to know what happens next. Please update soon. Awesome story so far.
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December 18, 2006 at 12:00 AM
great start, Love the snarky Snape. Update soon.