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December 14, 2006 at 12:00 AM
ooohhhh! cant wait to see the next chapter! Awesome idea! may your typing fingers be magicaly charmed....Brightest Blessings, Kim
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December 14, 2006 at 12:00 AM
ch 2 - Interest ideas but you are dumping to much to fast. Example: Instead of telling us about genetic memory have it come up in conversation during the explanation / Q & A portion of the story.
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December 14, 2006 at 12:00 AM
this is a really good beginning. i'm very interested. but i look forward to a longer chapter again soon.
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December 14, 2006 at 12:00 AM
Love the story, i'd love it even more if it had longer chapters!! Love the story line, ur a genius!!
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December 14, 2006 at 12:00 AM
Intresting. I would like to see whats going to happen next.
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December 14, 2006 at 12:00 AM
Sounds good so far I'd like to see were this goes.