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January 7, 2007 at 12:00 AM
This is such a good story and I can't wait for more. If your still doing the mailing list I would love to be on it. My addy is SeverusSentinel@wmconnect.com
Keep up the great work.
Keep up the great work.
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January 7, 2007 at 12:00 AM
I just love this story! So amazing!
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January 7, 2007 at 12:00 AM
Absolutly fuckin awesome. Your a brilliant author!
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January 7, 2007 at 12:00 AM
ahhhhhh.... write more or i KEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEELLLLL you
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January 7, 2007 at 12:00 AM
I'm glad to see things are moving along. :)
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January 7, 2007 at 12:00 AM
wow really nice start :) i like your story very much,
i'd never expect that Draco could be so nice person,
well, please continue
i'd never expect that Draco could be so nice person,
well, please continue
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January 7, 2007 at 12:00 AM
Hey, just some grammatical criticism: egoist isn't a proper word, the term is egocentric; also in that sentence are three words that essentially mean the same thing. Trim it down to egocentric or self centered to alleviate the weightiness of the sentence. Otherwise great job!
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January 7, 2007 at 12:00 AM
That was an awesome chapter. I guess Draco finally caught on to Harry's need for his love. Not so hard to believe when you've gone without any for most of your life. No doubt Harry has found way too many people seem to only want him for his fame instead. As for the matter of Draco's soft spot on his neck, well I've had similar reactions as well. Extremely sensitive-oh hell yeah! Keep up the good work!
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January 7, 2007 at 12:00 AM
Love your story. Please update soon.
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January 7, 2007 at 12:00 AM
aww, harry and draco are a cute couple. draco doesn't seem to be having any trouble pretending to be his boyfriend does he? snape is way to smug in this chapter! good work, this storys really good.