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for Centre of Twilight

by Dzien

person Darkless
schedule September 7, 2009 at 12:00 AM
Love it, love it, LOVE it!

LoL

Now off to the next.
person Mie
schedule January 11, 2007 at 12:00 AM
I can't wait for the next installment this is the most amazing story. Still waiting for some threesome action though *big shit eating grin*
person Alison
schedule January 2, 2007 at 12:00 AM
Great stories and I just LOVE the name of the Aunt. ;o) Please start and finish the sequel soon!!! Happy New Year! =o)
person J.S.
schedule December 27, 2006 at 12:00 AM
Really cool story! I wish Draco would hurry up and join Severus and Harry again, though!
person NightOwl
schedule December 27, 2006 at 12:00 AM
Thank you for this wonderfull story! I really love it.
person R.A.B.
schedule December 26, 2006 at 12:00 AM
You write really well. Just wanted to know if I should hate Draco in this? I really do. I like all the others. I guess since it is a Harryand Snape story that Draco will be out the pic?
person Bookworm51485
schedule December 25, 2006 at 12:00 AM
I have a bit of an obsessive nature. Once my minds on something and I'm thinking about it I find it hard to get it out of my head no matter how hard I try. But with your story, as soon as I started reading the chapter it would be gone and I'd be focused completely. I love your writing style, it's not sparse but not so loaded down with details and words that it's hard to get into it. I love your characters and the way you've written them. And of course, something that's always a plus, your spelling and grammar is great.

I'm not a huge fan of stories where Draco's on the bottom but I don't mind it in your story. Bottom!Draco usually involves skewing Draco's personality where he behaves in a manner that just doesn't seem like him at all, but he still feels like Draco. Not saying I wouldn't love to see Harry on the bottom eventually also:D

I can't wait for your next update in this story and for Snape's inclusion in their threesome. I have to say Draco is starting to bother me a bit with the whole Hermione thing. He's being selfish, knowing that Harry wants her friendship again but making him feel guilty for wanting to try to reconcile. I hope that he fixes that, it's not fair to Harry. Or maybe he's just jealous because his friends aren't/can't attempt a reconciliation with him. Oh well, I just can't wait for your next update.
person jaimie
schedule December 25, 2006 at 12:00 AM
thank you!! for emailing me and updating! and now i have to curse you again! lol

i agree with everything Bookworm51485 said!! about their personalities and all.

Harry is quick to anger, especially with some subjects. Draco is being an ass...but...i guess i can understand. He needs to get over himself though.
i have a feeling something bad is about to happen...
person Bookworm51485
schedule December 25, 2006 at 12:00 AM
I'm glad to see an update so quickly. I guess you must already have the story written out or at least part of it. I have to say though that Draco is annoying the hell out of me. He's being such a spoiled brat but trying to place all the blame on Harry. The only thing I'll say is that Harry should have shut him down a lot sooner with his crap. Harry should NOT have to give up all his old friends just because Draco's feeling a little insecure and excessively possessive. Personally, I don't think Harry should apologize to Draco at all, I think Draco should come begging on his hands and knees for Harry to take him back after the crap he pulled. What a butt.

But I still love your story anyways, even though Draco's pissing me off.

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