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by Tumshie

schedule May 6, 2009 at 12:00 AM
Deliciously rediculus, just the way I like it!!! I vote for HP/HG stories. "Pre DH preferibly".
schedule April 5, 2009 at 12:00 AM
I am very happy that I stumble across this story. I love these stories where Dumbldork is bashed. The simple reason is being a fan form the time the 1st book came out. I noticed that things didn't seem to add up. Why would a Headmaster allow a teacher that he knew would have a grudge against a student. With that said, I loved the story and all the detail you put in it. Only thing I didn't see as possible is the potion mixed lemon drops. Why would dumbldork eat them if he knew that were laced. Lastly i just finished what you have wrote as of April 05, 2009. I hope that the story isn't finished as it seems to not have Tied up all its loose ends.
person hemotem
schedule November 11, 2008 at 12:00 AM
A very good read I thank you for writing it. I also hope to see more of this story in the near future.


Hemotem
person Anon
schedule September 23, 2008 at 12:00 AM
It's been a long time, PLEASE update!! Update now!
person pfeil
schedule July 12, 2008 at 12:00 AM
Does the UK have Miranda rights? I'm fairly sure we don't here in Canada, and we pretty much just copied theirs, so...
schedule June 24, 2008 at 12:00 AM
Please continue to update, I have loved this story since it was first posted, I can't wait to see what happens next.
person genna
schedule April 13, 2008 at 12:00 AM
Either you are with us or you are against us...

I think this is the most creative dark HP universe I've read.
person genna
schedule April 12, 2008 at 12:00 AM
Revenge, retribution, and recompense. Payback is central to this story.

I first started reading because Harry taking command of his life is something I miss in most stories. You allowed us to see how poorly he was treated. From there, Harry FINALLY devises a way out of his misery. I was impressed and happy by the training he received.

The rest hurts me. Each payback is worse for Dumbledore, Snape and the Dursley. I like Dumbledore and snape. I have continued reading even though I yearn for reconciliation.

You have had a good idea and worked it through. Good job.
schedule March 28, 2008 at 12:00 AM
This is some incredible writing. Please keep it up because I want to see how it all turns out.
schedule March 27, 2008 at 12:00 AM
love this story =D
hope u keep it updated

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