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for Beyond Pathetic

by FarAway

person Anon
schedule August 10, 2008 at 12:00 AM
I really like this story alot. Can you please write some more chapters?
schedule June 15, 2008 at 12:00 AM
hey are you going to continue this or should i just delete it from my list??
e-mail me with your answer at kaoru_14_89@hotmail.com
...ta

Aya
schedule December 25, 2007 at 12:00 AM
PLEASE CONTINUE!!!
schedule December 13, 2007 at 12:00 AM
Love your story! Keep up the good work.
person GiaDarcy
schedule October 31, 2007 at 12:00 AM
You must continue this! But, I understand with college and everything. I'm in the same boat.

Can't wait till your next update!
schedule October 22, 2007 at 12:00 AM
Great story, just a tiny nitpick. on the bottom of chapter 4, the morning after, you use the term coitus. I believe that's only for intercourse and not for masturbation?

I like the portrait of him going a bit nuts.

I read part or all of this before, so I may have reviewed before.
schedule September 13, 2007 at 12:00 AM
UPDATE!!! UPDATE!!! UPDATE!!!
person Anon
schedule August 25, 2007 at 12:00 AM
I really like this story alot. Can please write some more chapters?
person Karin84c
schedule August 17, 2007 at 12:00 AM
This will be the most unoriginal review you will ever read. Here we go:

I love your story! Can't wait to read more.

And-- Done. ;)
schedule August 17, 2007 at 12:00 AM
please please please write more. i love the sightly angsty-confused snape.

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