rate_review Reviews

This is twisted, confusing, socialy wrong and yet at the same time strangely intriguing. Well done! I don't understand what was pierced on Harry's person. I hope you clarify it in the next chapter. xxx

Dear gawd. That was the most disturbing thing I have ever read in my entire life. I loved it. <3

I am sorry that you're getting such negative reviews. Please continue the story. If their complaint is spelling/grammar, I'd be willing to beta for you.

It is very...different. Not in a bad way, just, different.

This is by far the worst fic I have ever read! (And I have read many a fanfic.) It is horrible! You should seriously have warned readers that this story is so awful, that way no one is as shocked and sickened as I was!The plot is disgusting, the writing is atrocious and it is not even entertaining, in any way, whatsoever! The storyline is absolutely revolting! What kind of repulsive, disturbed person thinks of a story like this?!? And the worst part (almost, its hard to tell exactly which part is the worst because it is so horrifyingly deficient) is it is not even realistic! The teachers would definitely not just sit and allow this to happen, and furthermore, Harry would not be turned on by any of it! You should be ashamed that you wrote a story as nauseating as this! If I were you, I would not post another chapter, or any fic from your disturbed mind ever again! Overall, my analysis of this appalling fiction is it defies the laws of nature and reason with its dreadfulness. You suck! For the love of J.K Rowling, NEVER WRITE AGAIN!

OMG! This story is awsome! I love the plot and the idea behind it, *sigh* if only there were more like this one around. I do agree that things are confusing in it though, BUT! if you haven't recieved an offer for a beta reader I would be happy to apply for the job!
Im really good with detail and I could help you lessen the confusion that seems to be your main critisism. Over all I hope you update soon with or with out a beta! I really dont care but this is a story that must be continued.
Oh and if people keep giving you crap about not warning about non-con and how "disturbing" it is, tell them to go and stuff it! lol If they cant properly read your warnings perhaps they shouldn't even be on this site.
Anyway keep it up! I've read this thing over 4 times and counting I cant wait for more! Woot Send me an email if you consider my offer acceptible! ^_^
BTW if you want to see the kind of stuff I write feel free to cheackout my profile at:
http: //www .fanfiction.net/u/211850/
*Just remove the spaces* lol
update soon!
Kitty4Green

God...What does it say about people getting off on violence and rape???

Sick, sick, sick!!!

Perhaps you should think about the reason for so many people writing this. I see you finally put N/C in your summary after deleting my review. Perhaps that will save you from flamers like me who just hate rapefics and would have never read this if you had put it in from the beginning. On the other hand... all the other things criticized still apply.

OK, it's not like I'm not used to weird stuff, but this was a little bit too disturbing for me...
I didn't really expect something that... O_o

Gotta read it again, I guess :)

I was just reading the newest reviews and dare I say it....
Lady Truth fuck off. Any one who give such a long review just to bash someone is truely ignorant. What makes me laugh is that she used a large vocabulary to make herself seem more intellegent.

Oh and this line made me laugh histerically, and I quote: "What kind of repulsive, disturbed person thinks of a story like this?!?"

...um... didn't she read the warnings, the rating, or even the tittle...?
Put it all together and even with a vague summary you can get the idea behind the story. People are stupid.

Here's anouther one: Quoting again " The teachers would definitely not just sit and allow this to happen,..."

If she had actually read the story and not stopped half way through it she would have found out the reason for the teacher and students lack of concern.

Last thing. She called you disturbed... That's funny! She's reading an NC-17 story that's rated for it content telling the world that it is a MATURE story, and one that has such and extensive list of warnings on it.

...........something isn't right with that....
My dear author ignore this imbecile's rant on your story. I appluad constructive critisism however, what she did showed nothing but ignorance and immaturity. Your story is a piece of art. Art is subjective and it is to be viewed (or in this case read) with an open mind. To do otherwise shows a blindness to reality and the world in general. Close-minded individuals are the reasons there is so much hate in the world...

I am disgusted by close-minded individuals and therfore, LadyTruth you disgust me!
My dear author I beg you to leave her comment up so that everyone can see her ignorance. Please don't give into her and stop this story. You're brilliant and though you may not write like JKR don't give up. After all "Professional Writers are only ametures that didn't give up!" (author unknown)

Stay Cheery and ignore those who have and will flame you.
Kitty4Green