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for Draco's Gift

by slashpervert

person sticky
schedule January 5, 2007 at 12:00 AM
Perfect; I loved it. Short and sweet. They were so in-character. Great job!
person Angel
schedule January 4, 2007 at 12:00 AM
Wow...in so many ways, I did not expect that ending. Quite good though, The more to impress me. I can not wait until the next installment. This story has certainly lifted my spirits....well it shouldn't but has.

Excellent Work.
person AngelStarFire
schedule January 3, 2007 at 12:00 AM
You now have at least one vote for a sequel... wow. That ending hit me like a ton of bricks, even though I kinda saw it coming. Very well written... and tragic. Which is why I would like to see more... very few fictions make me cry, but this one came awfully close.

Happy Writing!
schedule January 3, 2007 at 12:00 AM
AWWWWW! This could be very, very beautiful!!!!! (Not that it isn't already, mind you) I woul definitely love to see more of this!!!!

Slashy Snitch
person Zoomi
schedule January 3, 2007 at 12:00 AM
Now, you can't just leave it like that!!! Sure, technically you could leave it like that and tell all your readers to think up their own ending but I'm not very imaginative so you have to do it for me! *whines*

This is an awesome fic, I really hope you are planning to continue it and not leave as a one-shot. You can't leave it as Draco getting Harry to fall in love with him and just leaving!! It's just getting good!! Now Harry will start looking for Draco and everytime he sees someone with blonde hair he'll look their way but its never him. Never Draco. So you gotta write more! Please?!
person thrnbrooke
schedule January 3, 2007 at 12:00 AM
Oh how sad! Do they both survive the war? Will they ever find one another again?
person Anon
schedule January 3, 2007 at 12:00 AM
nononono! Draco will not die, he will come back and he and harry will spend forever together, damn it! the way it is supose to be! Gawsh! Please update soon!!!
person Angelkitty
schedule January 3, 2007 at 12:00 AM
Awww! that was so cute at the very end! that was very nice... and CUTE!!!!

I can't wait for more.... let draco be a good guy? Please? *puppy eyes*

i love the way you portrayed Draco the Strong overly prideful malfoy is still there but there's bits of the man he really is showing through... And Harry of course falls for the trap! I swear without hermione he'd be a lost cause.... i like how you had him tied to the chair that was funny... espescially his reaction to it *giggle* can't get much better than that! ......................can it?

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