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May 29, 2016 at 12:00 AM
Kinda cute. I liked it.
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January 20, 2009 at 12:00 AM
You have a really good story here, but I would like to give you one piece of constructive criticism. You should really watch your tense use, dear, and perhaps have a beta give it a second look.
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August 18, 2007 at 12:00 AM
HOT!!!
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July 20, 2007 at 12:00 AM
A very nicely made story. quite a turn on if you ask me personally.
Keep up the great work! for the rate a four.
Keep up the great work! for the rate a four.
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April 20, 2007 at 12:00 AM
Interesting!
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January 14, 2007 at 12:00 AM
That was awesome. Did you finish before you finished?
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January 9, 2007 at 12:00 AM
Nice. Not as explicit as I usually go for, but quite nicely written and enjoyable to read.
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January 9, 2007 at 12:00 AM
Awww! Sequel!