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I love the story and all, but one little quibble in chap 35--her eyes are "pansy brown"? I guess you're talking about the coloring inside yellow pansies? The phrase threw me off a bit.

@34. lucius is sweet with the caring and being overprotective thing. update soon

*DB*

excellent as usual.

"With a mighty shudder, Lucius let go and his magnificent rod gushed hot cum like a flamethrower all over his torso, his face, and the sheets in accompaniment to his litany of appreciative pornographic curses."

lol. I just love that sentence and that last part about a litany of appreciative pornographic curses. It made my day to read that.

I like it. Please update soon.

Wonderful chapter, as usual!

Absolutely incredible! :) Brilliant as always, ;) Can't wait for more.

I think Lucius needs to let Hermione go to a muggle mall and buy one of those BIG cookies they have there. I think that would help make up for his mistake.
Wow, Hermione is a better pregnant woman than I ever was. I lived on cherry kool aid(I didn't hold back on the sugar when I made it) and pizza. Then I would wash it all down with a candy bar. Yeah I was a sad case. Don't worry the baby turned out fine. I was better behaved with my other pregnancies. Maybe it's a first pregnancy thing?
Looks like we are moving right a long with the pregnancy. I can't wait to see how Lucius acts when Hermione is in labor.
I can't wait for Lucius apology. Don't be to hard on him Hermione. Then again, she should really milk this apology. I don't think she will be hearing to many of them come from his pureblooded mouth.

LoL.... oh my goodness... I would hex him into next week! Has Luscius ever even heard of the word 'grovel'? I doubt it... but it does seem he needs to get a little familiar with it, eh? Lovely chapter. About time he got a wake-up call, although he needs plenty more. Can't wait to see how he's going to work through the apology.

Lol, oh Lucius still has a lot to learn about trusting his wife, he should have inspected the package more carefully before he accused her. I still think Hermione probably should have told him that they were sugarless and not hid them from him. Of course he probably wouldn't have liked it anyway. I use to hide food too when I was preganant, but for me it wasn't about hiding it from my husband because he would have been upset. It was more about the fact that I had a secret stash that nobody knew about and I didn't have to share them, they were Milano cookies from Pepperidge Farm :)