Reviews for A Living Secret ~ COMPLETED - Harry Potter

person Anon

schedule March 12, 2007 at 12:00 AM

ahh!
i want more! and finally snape and hermione are in contact!! yay!!

person ::Yawnz::

schedule March 11, 2007 at 12:00 AM

Hmm... this is my first time reviewing one of your stories... though I've read every single one of them. Well, not every one, there was one about twins that I grazed over, but that's neither here nor there. The point is your stories became damn well addicting. (I have a rather obsessive streak when it comes to reading. Can't put a book down, can't close my browser ^^) And that's all fine and dandy when I find an excellent author whose written a few stories, but it's just my luck you've written dozens. Some of them over a hundred chapters long. It's a good thing I'm a fast reader, but even still this account has sucked up many hours over the last two weeks. I'm not even interested in fanfiction generally, and certainly not 'adult' erotica, but I was lazy one night and wondered if maybe there was reading material online and lo and behold I find 'Adult Fan Fiction'. I can't say I'm addicted to the site, or fanfiction in general, as most of it's drivel, but your stories are spectacular. You really ought to write a book. Think on it, your writing style is better than what I find in alot of books. And I don't just mean the Erotica. Honestly, I skimmed through a couple love scenes. They don't really do anything for me. (Though examples of possesiveness and 'Your mine, don't speak to him!' cause a slight twinge in the old heartstrings.) Basically, your an excellent writer, I'm following this story, (and pleased you update frequently), and I urge you to seriously consider creating your own little world. The character's you've introduced have alot of personality and depth, I have no doubt you could create your own plot to go along. Anyway, it's late where I am, and I was just heading up to bed. Thought I'd let loose a little ramble in your ear. Just so you know your appreciated. I'm not sure how much sense this spiel will make in the morning, (I'm not very coherent when I'm tired) and I'd ask that you please excuse my spelling blunders. Toodles.

person barbarade

schedule March 11, 2007 at 12:00 AM

Great chapte. Loved the fact Fawkes was there to save Severus.

person scotsgirl

schedule March 11, 2007 at 12:00 AM

Brilliant chapter it was fun reading it looking forward to next update

person skydancer