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September 18, 2009 at 12:00 AM
Now, that was a good story.
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June 23, 2007 at 12:00 AM
That was amazing. Your writing style is superior to anything i've read on AFF so far.
You had me 2 inches away from the screen. I was even yelling and protesting like in a movie where some dumb chick runs into a room and locks herself in not knowing that her psycho ex is in there with a gun!
Kudos.
You had me 2 inches away from the screen. I was even yelling and protesting like in a movie where some dumb chick runs into a room and locks herself in not knowing that her psycho ex is in there with a gun!
Kudos.
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January 22, 2007 at 12:00 AM
This was very, very nice! I like the way you wrote Draco's hardships, and how he learned from them, just in time to realize his love for Harry. I really enjoyed it! ^_^ EM
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January 19, 2007 at 12:00 AM
i first must say that there are very few fanfics that have caused me to think of and weigh my own values. Yours has become one of them. never have i seen such a complex fanfic laid out so beautifully and truthfully. i thank you deeply for writing it and hope to read more of your lovely work soon.
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January 19, 2007 at 12:00 AM
You blew me away! Simple as that!
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January 19, 2007 at 12:00 AM
I don't think there are even words to describe this. This was definitely one of the best written HP fanfics I have EVER read. In fact, I'm still all teary eyed from reading.
You have amazing talent hon and I think you could even consider a career as a writer professionally. I'm glad that I decided to check out this story.
You have amazing talent hon and I think you could even consider a career as a writer professionally. I'm glad that I decided to check out this story.
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January 19, 2007 at 12:00 AM
there's parts that I would change the wording on, parts that could've used a beta reader (or a spell checker), BUT...it was good.
I hated who all died, but all in all, it made me cry, and not in a "omg, this writing sucks!" kinda way. You did good hon, you did good :)
~Gynnie
I hated who all died, but all in all, it made me cry, and not in a "omg, this writing sucks!" kinda way. You did good hon, you did good :)
~Gynnie
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January 18, 2007 at 12:00 AM
This is the most delicatedly written, reasoned, angst, dark but positive fiction I have read so far (though I am considered to be new here, with less than 1 month presence)...but I just love... totally absorbed and mesmerized by this fiction. Characters are vividly described, plots and twists are well elaborated, feelings and sensations are intricatedly laid out...above all, I just love the setting and notions...
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January 18, 2007 at 12:00 AM
It is a rare thing, to have the priveledge of reading a story of this caliber. This is an amazing piece of art, and I thank you, very much, for sharing it. You have a gift for bringing words to life, and I hope to read more of your writing. This was absolutely breathtaking.
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January 18, 2007 at 12:00 AM
excellent story. different from the other.
keep up the good work.
keep up the good work.