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Yippee a new chapter. that was great. more more more. oops sorry for sounding so greedy.

great story, good to see it hasn't been abandoned. Hope to read the next chapter soon!

Please update this wonderful story. If it ends at some point, we will understand, but what happens?

I love this story!! I can't wait for you to update!!

ah, how can i even start? you are a wonderful writer and your story is amazing. i cant believe i havent discovered it untill now. honestly, your plot development is superb and your lemons? i dont have words. I would be thrilled if you would check out my fic. Its called Saving Grace and is a dark severus/hermione like yours. I would dearly love to hear your opinion, as i thoroughly admire your work. In particular i would love to hear any advice you have for lemon writing. Personally i am not that into writing them but my readers are begging for them and so i feel obligated to supply. The way you work them into the story as actual elements of the plot development, rather than just random sex scenes is amazing and i would love some pointers on how to do so in my story. If you do find the time to check it out, please just review as the email i have for this site doesnt work. Once again you are an incredible writer and i can not wait to read more of this amazing story!
- A true fan, Demosthenes

Ok, OK, this story is wonderful. I keep checking for updates. I was so happy to see a new chapter.

I like it. Please update soon.

Wow! That was hot! I loved the way she seduced him showing her grown up and confident. She is one lucky girl.

Is he going to admit his feelings for her?

Hay

I love your Story! I could not stop reading! You are a grate Author! I hope the next Chap is coming soon!

Greets Lady-Claw

PS: Sorry if there are any grammer Mistakes. English is not my native Language.

go mione ... that was awsome .. i hope sev feels a little better now ... pleaseupdate soon i would love to read more .. later for now

angel