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I\'ve been coming back daily to see if this was updated. I can\'t wait for the final two chapters as well as the start of the next story. Would have reviewed you sooner, but just finally got around to registering. Very well written. Can\'t wait to see what else you suprise us with. Thanks for ent entertainment. Sunny

Ahh... I came back from holiday to be blessed with four new chapters of your fic! Thank you! Don\'t make me hold out too much longer for the next one, will you?

OHHHH Soooo incredibly evil!!! I just read the story again...for the second time and it was more evil that the first time...but i must congratulate you on your courage to portray Hermione and Severus\' relationship so well. Your right, its not just sex and marrige and all the good stuff, its working though things:) Its a brilliant story and i really wish you\'d hurry up and update before i go absolutly insane:)

Catherine

Gahhhhh!!!! It just started to get happy, or.. erm... leading up to happy... and its over?!? Where\'s my next fix? You are an amazing author!! I am glad you are writing a new story, I would have been heartbroken when this one was over! Thanks so much!!!

BTW have you read Angel in My Arms by Snapesflower? Its really good!

I didn\'t really understand your last comment to me on the replies, but thanks.
Draco is such a blunt person. No tact. \"How\'s it going Severus? So Hermione\'s having your child?\" GAH! I really think that is was good for Severus to know though. I can\'t wait till the next chappie to see how Severus confronts Hermy. I didn\'t think that Sev would react so calmly to the fact that Hermy didn\'t tell him about the baby. He blows up about little things, but when she holds back a GIANT secret he\'s like \"AWW, I wonder what the baby\'s room will look like?\" Seems a little OOC for your story. But who am I to judge, I\'m not a writer (but I play one on T.V.).
Sirius is so pathetically cute in the way he loves Hermoine, it makes me sad. *comforts Sirius in an indecent manner* And I love the white picket fence and 2.6 children thing. \"Meet our children, Sirius Jr., Annalese, and Sco....,\" That is hilarious.
That was a evil preview of your next story. I knew that they (Hermy and Sev) were going to get together and have a wonderful life, but I wanted to wait till the end of the story. *hits herself for reading preview*

Reeling in pain from the blows to head,
Morwen Snape

Lets hope Draco can work his magic on Severus! *crosses fingers* Wonderful chapter, poor Hermione, this must be re har hard for her. I think you are writing everybody\'s reactions really well, they are very realistic. But I\'m not sure how many tugs my heart can take. My heart ached as I read about Severus and how he couldn\'t sleep back in his bed, and how his home felt empty now. I hope you are able to update again soon, I just love this story.

As I enjoyed the previuos chapter-lemonny and arng(mng(many people dream about having sex intercourse in public place even so they aren`t so courageous to make dreams come true-this \"Goodbay\" of Hermiona was gorgoeus for me-I like this idea)as a pure entertaintment,now the last chapter left me sad and uneasy.First,when I`d read \"really evil\" preview-I thought-\"I have to shoot this woman-she did it again\"-put Sirius around Hermiona as the healer of her broken heart,yet I found out such a wonderful,subtle description of disinterested love you wrote,the portrait of Sirius-as a loving,warm,devoted man-my heart was immediatly melted and anger disappeared-this side of him,doesn`t matter-kept in character or OOC-had changed my mind and made it up,I`m around to like him-what`s very unexpected for me,indeed-it means that your skills as a writer are marvellous-you convinced me at the end.I`m very glad that Severus knows about Hermiona`s pregnancy and circumstancies they were involved-I see you gave up developing of infidelity plot-I think too the story would be darker and more difficult to end happily nonetheless I`m curious what way you tried to lead,using this matter.I want to admit Draco is sometimes very straightforward and merciless performing \"the voice of common sense\" yet this time I enjoyed and admired the way he had treated Snape.It`s rather funny and a little odd that such an adult man as Severus needs to take a very young one`s advice,besides his former student. Who is more experienced in this relationship?-Draco,no doubt! I hope the happy end you`ve considered-will include the reconcilation of Severus andmionmiona.I don`t want to see Sirius with her despite the fact I`m looking at him more friendly.Severus as the father-in-the-future-lovely thing watching him how he would deal with this challenge in his life!Many hugs for my beloved author!

This story is excellent! I can\'t wait for the next chapter :o)

ok, no more previews, evil ending, cliffie size of a huge building... LOL
I m watching my language now :)
but ow boy love the chapter !! that\'s one thing I can tell you :)
Looking forward to the end

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