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June 25, 2007 at 12:00 AM
poor draco, lucius should be shot. I can't say it was bad, and it was well writen. Poor draco, it's sad really how ones body can force reactions out of you even when your mind is against it. i guess when it comes down to it it's because we are animals and i guess instincts like those can take command and over ride our reason, our brain.
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May 23, 2007 at 12:00 AM
That was fantastic. I love your Draco, so desperate for approval and attention, and so scarred...
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May 21, 2007 at 12:00 AM
This is beautiful. Dark, haunting, gripping. Keep it up :)
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May 20, 2007 at 12:00 AM
OMFG......this was incredible, the sex i mean. I am personally a very horny 15 yo, and even though I was bored somewhat, I was Practically passing out of pleasure reading chapter 2! It was so hot! And it made my heart flutter up and out of my chest and throat!
In conclusion, I love your Story, It is exiting, erotic, and altogether sex on a stick! LOVE YOU!!! <3 <3 <3 ***)O)*** -RavenBS
In conclusion, I love your Story, It is exiting, erotic, and altogether sex on a stick! LOVE YOU!!! <3 <3 <3 ***)O)*** -RavenBS
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May 17, 2007 at 12:00 AM
You showed a realistic portrayal of Draco that's original. The style in the first chapter was really interesting (in a good way) and way Draco's thoughts were added to the second chapter was awesome. I haven't read many sex scenes where the thoughts are there...I wish everyone could right such great scenes. Keep up the brilliant work!
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May 17, 2007 at 12:00 AM
Wow. This was a stunning piece of writing.. I can really see this going on in Draco's head.. his thought pattern is perfect. Over all... You get a giant cookie... whatever flavor you desire. oh, and write more....
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May 3, 2007 at 12:00 AM
Wow, this is really great -- you get right into Draco's head. So intense! And hot. Loved it. Hope you'll keep writing Malfoycest!
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April 19, 2007 at 12:00 AM
Nice.
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April 4, 2007 at 12:00 AM
I'd love a third part please :)
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April 2, 2007 at 12:00 AM
Wow.