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... start over.

try to make a bit of since.... and dont rush it.

like the randomness.
is too confusing.

Soooo can't wait for chapter 2!

OMG that's fucked. OH FUCk that was fun to read and I can't wait for more. You are going to expand as to the reasons they are all suddenly hot for each other aren't you. like perhaps snape putting a potion into the schools food supply for that meal??? that really would make him smile. OMG I love it i can't say it enough. Your writing is a little rough though and maybe another round of editing would be due but other than that i love it. Keep it up if help is needed please just ask and it will be so.

Ja ne
Kireania

Gods you have to update this, please update, please please please

Soooo can't wait for chapter 3! Why is Harry hiding the way he looks?

tgffw... which mean to good for f'n words,but here are some that come to mind asome, excellent,intreeging, ectera. I agree with draco harry shouldn't have hidden that or the glamor punk/emo harry *drool* asome story lookin forward to the next one