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September 10, 2007 at 12:00 AM
Ruth, I adore the premise of this story! As you say, a bit of a peep show! It's outrageously outrageous, but not a pwp. You have an amazing career in front of you, I hope you realize that!
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September 10, 2007 at 12:00 AM
I've come back to this fic for some diversion. Adam truly is my absolute fav of your OC's. He's too delicious!!
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July 29, 2007 at 12:00 AM
wow. fluff. thats different. i love it. it was hilarious at the beginning, and im not sure why it changed but it did. and agrus is an asshole. *shudder* ok, off to find another story....
Andy
Andy
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July 29, 2007 at 12:00 AM
Andy: I think it got fluffy simply because it was sex, sex, sex in the beginning and I wanted to really show the difference between their first encounter with Severus having sex with her to save her life, and his wanting to be with her as a true lover. So, the fluff factor increased dramatically. Plus, it was rather fun to write Snape this way. :) Thanks for commenting.
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July 28, 2007 at 12:00 AM
goodness. this is a REALLY hot fic. i love Lord Malfoy. i will definately make it a point to finish this, and soon!!
Andy
Andy
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July 27, 2007 at 12:00 AM
HAHAHA. that was so funny. the list of minerva and albus to keep snape from coming. then the tongue. that was hillarious. i love your writing, but i have to leave before i finish the story :( oh well i will read it eventually.
Andy
Andy
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July 1, 2007 at 12:00 AM
Just read the whole thing, loved it all the way to the end. Though I wonder if Harry and Lucius ever managed to work something out... Great Story.
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June 28, 2007 at 12:00 AM
Wonderful! I really enjoyed reading such a different story. It kept me up all night wanting to see what happened. Keep it up!
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June 8, 2007 at 12:00 AM
Hi
I just wanted to say I love this story!
I have finished it and I would like to congratulate you
on such a FANTASTIC story!
I really enjoyed how you put Severus; very very sexy and
likes to be in charge.
It is sooooooooooooooooooooooooo hott!
Anyway thank you once again for putting up this AMAZING story
I love your writing techniques
And I cannot wait to read more of your stories
Maybe you could do one about Harry and Hermione or Hermione
and Draco or even Hermione and Ron!
I don
I just wanted to say I love this story!
I have finished it and I would like to congratulate you
on such a FANTASTIC story!
I really enjoyed how you put Severus; very very sexy and
likes to be in charge.
It is sooooooooooooooooooooooooo hott!
Anyway thank you once again for putting up this AMAZING story
I love your writing techniques
And I cannot wait to read more of your stories
Maybe you could do one about Harry and Hermione or Hermione
and Draco or even Hermione and Ron!
I don
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May 11, 2007 at 12:00 AM
ROFLMAO!!
I'm having the greatest time reading this. It's so funny, pervy and wrong! LOL
I just wanted to let you know of a small bit that you might want to change in chapter 13.
"When Ron finally arrived at the flat, the first thing he did was grab Susan roughly, kiss her passionately, then threw her over his shoulder and headed straight for the bedroom."
While that's a very passionate thing for Ron to do, 'over the shoulder' is not something you do to a 5 months pregnant woman, or any number of months along, capice?
I took one look at that and went, "Huh??" A simple mistake, yes, but one I really think you need to fix. Just have him pick her up bridal style, that's more romantic and less cavemanish.
Well, back to the story. WHOOOhoOOooOOoo!
I'm having the greatest time reading this. It's so funny, pervy and wrong! LOL
I just wanted to let you know of a small bit that you might want to change in chapter 13.
"When Ron finally arrived at the flat, the first thing he did was grab Susan roughly, kiss her passionately, then threw her over his shoulder and headed straight for the bedroom."
While that's a very passionate thing for Ron to do, 'over the shoulder' is not something you do to a 5 months pregnant woman, or any number of months along, capice?
I took one look at that and went, "Huh??" A simple mistake, yes, but one I really think you need to fix. Just have him pick her up bridal style, that's more romantic and less cavemanish.
Well, back to the story. WHOOOhoOOooOOoo!