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Oh Gods, no...Draco can't do this. If and that's a big 'IF' Lucius let's Harry go, Draco will be dead my next morn. Well in any case I can't wait till your next update.

Chapter 41--oh fuck oh fuck oh fuck...I read the other reviews.....this is bad and I'm tearing up already...

Normal so far....talking about food....SHITE THE ANTICIPATION IS DRIVING ME NUTTERS!!!! OH FUCK BAD BAD BAD BAD *hyperventilating*

OH FUCK OH FUCK OH FUCK NONONONONONONONONONONONONONONONONONO SHIT SHIT SHIT SHIT SHIT REMUS, HERMIONE, SOMEONE WHERE THE FUCK ARE YOU PEOPLE!!!!!!?!?!?!?!?!?!??!?!?!

DRACO!!!!! NO, THEY CAN'T DO ANYTHING BAD TO DRACO!!!! MY BABY IS FRAGILE!!!!!

OH GOD OH GOD OH GOD NO NOT HIM ANYONE BUT HIM!!!!!! FUCK FUCK FUCK FUCK FUCK *crying and can't breathe* can't...see....computer...screen...to...read....crying too hard! LUCIUS NOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOO I'LL KILL YOU, YOU FUCKING BASTARD!!!!!!

OH GOD YOU'RE KILLING ME HERE!!!!! *dying slowly* HARRY DRACO HARRY DRACO HARRY DRACO!!!!!!!! MY BABIES!!!!! IT'LL BE OKAY!!!!! IT HAS TO BE!!!!!

Oh. My. God. Okay, they're together...good good...OH FUCK BAD BAD BAD BAD BAD

*screaming in anxiety* NOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOO HOW COULD YOU LEAVE IT LIKE THAT/??????????????????????????? WHAT'S GOING TO HAPPEN???????????????????????????????????////

(Yami has it right = *implodes violently*)

NOOOOOOOOOO!!!!!!!! *Smites Lucius* DIE EVIL BASTARD DIE!!! I'm soooo sad now for two reasons: 1) I don't want bad things to happen to Harry and Draco and Lucius is just a bastard!! *sob more* and 2) I JUST realized that there are only three more chapters!! X_X This is almost over, how is that possible??? *dies* want more but I don't want it to end! Ahh

Great update! I'm glad to know what Dracco's thinking, and cross my fingers he won't do it again... and wow four more chapters to go... I almost don't want this to end...

(chap 36) its like this one chapter was a turning point. It went from being a good story with wonderful sex scenes. To an entire diffrent calaber of work. The woundless blade was a wonderful touch, and i especially enjoyed how draco draged it across his skin as he told harry all between him and his father. Then about how Pansy as well, only for him to explain that is was ultimatly for "their lord". I wonder if at the end of the chapter Harry really understands. But for Draco it was like he was going to be doing it anyways to keep his father from beating him, whats the diffrence if he does it five time then if he does it ten times, he would get things he wants and affection from a father that is obviously distant and he craves or rather craved affection for. Mayhap the speration from his father is what gave Draco time to see his relationship with his father in a diffrent light, time to step back from your own issues and see them in a diffrent light. It also makes sense now why Draco is alway so instant on being Harry's (for a moment i wanted to write Harries.....) to be owned by someone so pure and good would absolve him from his past sins. Or maybe i think to deeply into it. But i like to see it that way:).

ah it's almost over. I am kinda sad. I hate endings...esspecially when something so good has to end. you should forever write sequels...or equally as good stories. *smiles and looks hopeful*

AH! That was a very intense and sweet chapter. Please update soon.

Somehow the posting of Chapters 36-40 escaped my notice, but I am now coherent enough to read Ch 36 after Ch 35 left my brain on the floor in a puddle.

Chapter 36--Yay! Sweet aftermath! *gasp* WHAT DID LUCIUS DO????? DEATH TO LUCIUS!

He needs to talk about this! GOOD BOY, HARRY! FUCK! Which chapter was that "truth or dare" conversation in? I know it's not the "Daring Truth" chapter, but if anyone remembers which chapter that conversation was in, please email me! (graballz@gmail.com)

NO DRACO NO BABY NO! YOU ARE NOT A WHORE!!!! YOU'RE NOT!!!! I LOVE YOU!!! HARRY LOVES YOU!!! UNCONDITIONALLY!!!!! The abused child's syndrome!!! *whimper* Harry will be able to make him understand, right?

The whole "protection" element is breaking my heart!!!! HARRY WILL PROTECT YOU, DRACO!!!!

YES YES YES HOLD THAT BLONDE BABY!!!!! I'M SO RELIEVED!!! YAY HARRY! YES YES YES FUCKING YES KILL THAT GODDAMN CHILD MOLESTING BASTARD!!!!!!!

Chapter 37--Yay! Hugging and kissing and teasing!!! That's so right!! Especially after something traumatic like that, the best thing you can do is just continue on with life as normally as possible, and it'll get better!

*gasp* Oh yay, another game!!! *slight feeling of trepidation mixed with anticipation* Hopefully the most-recently-revealed secrets won't come up and hopefully it'll lead to some hot gay teen sex!

WHAT??? Draco....threesome??? MUST HAVE BACKSTORY ON THAT!!!! MUST HAVE!!!

OH GOD!!! HARRY WAS THE ONLY ONE WHO DRANK??!??!?!?!?!!? THAT'S FUCKING HYSTERICAL!!!!

EWWWWW Gross, Ron!!! OH FUCK, HERE COMES THE FOREPLAY!!!!! FUCKING Firewhiskey??? Awesome! *gasp* Harry just grabbed himself in front of the room???? Okay, I know they're all drunk, but DAMN! (Why can't I find a guy like Harry and Draco?? Actually, make that TWO guys! I want one of each! haha) Oh, wait, no he grabbed Draco!!! Fucking hott as hell, but can't say I'm surprised!!!! haha

I'm guessing that Ron (and maybe Hermione?) left the room...probably to go fuck each other....can't blame them......and Fred and George are probably right there....watching.....and going at it themselves!!!! SO HOTT!

LMAO I love the one-word dialogue!!!!! SO TRUE!!!! Drunk and fucked....mmmmmmmmmmmmmmmmmmmmmmmm!

Chapter 38--oh shit!! Caught by Remus?? Good thing he's so cool! YOU'RE COOL, REMUS!! THANKS FOR TAKING CARE OF MY BABIES!!!

GOD! Why can't Draco curse like that during sex?????? FUUUUUUUCKSONOFABITCH One word (that's not even supposed to be remotely connected to it) and I'm so turned on again!

OH FUCK!!!! GODDAMNYOU, YOU STUPID FUCKING BASTARD, WHY HOW DO YOU RUIN EVERYTHIGN??!!!!!!!!!

Daft Fear...we gotta go now. NOW, I tell you! Lucius HAS to die right FUCKING now! We can deal with Snape tomorrow, but Lucius is just ASKING for it!

haha Harry made the quotation marks in the air! I love it! Good boy, Harry! Talk to him! OH HARRY!!! IT'S GOING TO BE OKAY, BABY!!!! JUST KEEP LOVING HIM!!!!!! He'll break the cycle! It's a normal reaction, and Draco's been taught that his whole life!!! Just be paient with him, Harry-love, and FUCKING KILL LUCIUS!

Chapter 39--Lucius is SO dead. Please fucking kill him. Hard. And painfully.

OH SHIT!!! DRACO NONOONONONONONONONONONONONOONONONONONON PLEASE NO! PLEASE NO!!!!!! HARRY!!!!!!! HARRY, WHAT'S GOING ON????

YES good boy!!! GO HARRY! TRUST YOUR INSTINCTS!!!!! YES HE FOUND HIM!!!! STOP HIM!!!!!!! DRACO, MY BABY!!!!

Oh, Draco, honey!!!! *sad sigh* But Harry will take care of you!