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Oh you're lastest chapter,As I Walked By Myself, has such emotion in it and it really touched me. Now I'm curious whats in that journal Harry has found. Update soon

I like it. Please update soon.

post soon
bye bye

Right now your story is 'okay.' It could become 'good' if you took the time to clean it up a bit. I also suggest that learn the difference between the words 'your' and 'you're.' You switch them consistently. The AFF.net administrators may delete your story, thinking it was written by someone under age--as the level of your writing suggests to me it was. After all, that's a mistake someone who's been to high / secondary school shouldn't make.

Wow that was just amazing how you used that part where Dumbledore died in your plot. I'm looking forward to the next part of this story. I want to see how Severus will confront Harry if they cross paths again, I have a feeling that when they meet Harry will to curse Sev to death that is until he realizes that Sev is not fighting back, just a small idea well actually I have a continuation for this but it will be a bit long so if you ever want to use this just email me. I do hope this will have a happy ending, I'm a sucker for those. Looking forward to your next update.

Part two very soon? This was a heartwrenching ending!

This fic is great you better not stop writing it, or I might spank you.

"tumble down the stairs"??? Oh, I hope you are alright! I fear that Harry will turn his back on Snape, judging by the title of your next part. Please let their be a happy end to this!

Son't stop it there you evil >.< the poot ones... But very well written never the less ^^

wow very very good but als very sad
i hope that sev doesn't looses harrys love
keep going and post soon
bye bye