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for Draco's Cracked Mask

by graballz

person Toddy
schedule January 13, 2008 at 12:00 AM
I loved the beginning but got lost in the middle - the end was just great.
schedule January 13, 2008 at 12:00 AM
oh its great!
person Dezra
schedule January 13, 2008 at 12:00 AM
Very beautiful story. Great job.
schedule January 11, 2008 at 12:00 AM
Fantastic!! I am sooo going to miss this!
schedule December 31, 2007 at 12:00 AM
Wow...thanks for the shout out. Like I said before, I'm glad I was able to help indirectly. H/D are so therapeutic, I tell ya.

Pretty intense, Draco's emotional state. Definitely a believable thing that no one would think that he had any feelings at all.

Keep going.
person sunset20
schedule December 27, 2007 at 12:00 AM
*nods eagerly* Yes, yes I did like the sex. It was not only amazingly hot but also beautifully written. I almost died when you described their different orgasms. Wonderful. And I think you managed to describe them amazingly through their orgasms. I think they are really characteristic. :D I loved it.

*chuckles* Yes, I guess "Anatomy" can do that to readers. And writers. :P To write that story was the hardest ever! Because it was just too close to reality. Too personal. I actually started writing it one night after crying for about an hour or so for no reason at all. *shrugs* Whatever... I hope you can read it one day, I miss your amazing reviews very much. :D And yes, I would love to start talking to you again. :D
schedule December 27, 2007 at 12:00 AM
hot!
schedule December 27, 2007 at 12:00 AM
oh so sexy!!
person sunset20
schedule December 26, 2007 at 12:00 AM
Aw, hi, I've missed you. :D It's great to be reading from you something again and I love all this angsty-ness. Can't wait for the next chapter. :D I do think of you a lot too. Actually, while writing the story "Anatomy of a Teardrop" I had to think of you all the time, even more than while writing "Let go". "Anatomy of a Teardrop" is in a way a confession, or... well I don't really know, but Harry in that story is in a way based on you, or what that month was like when we were talking regularly. *blushes* Whatever... Merry Christmas to you too. *hugs*
person sunset20
schedule April 5, 2007 at 12:00 AM
Wow! You were wrong, I don't like it! I LOVE IT!!!!! Dark Harry, broken Draco, anytime - always makes me want to hug Draco, okay, to be honest every fic has this effect on me. :D This made me want to write something where I can let out my own personal grudge against that wretched failure that calls himself a father, well someday, maybe...:) Anyway, I'm looking forward to the next chapter, although I'm absolutely sure it's going to be completely different from what I expect it to be *shrugs* :D

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