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March 5, 2007 at 12:00 AM
DAMN IT! When I first read the "Lyrics by Lit" I was like, "Okay, a song I've never heard of...oh well. Let's see how it goes." And then "you make me come"...and I was like, "OH NO IT HAS TO END BETTER THAN THE SONG DID!" And I was whimpering by the end....fucking hot sex scenes, btw! And of course, it broke my heart to see that they weren't together (so in my head, I continued it...and guess who ends up together! lol)
Anyway, this was really REALLY good! Definitely a tragedy. Kudos to you for ending it when you did, though, because I have to have the "happy ending"....all of my stories do/will, at least. So bravo to you for doing what I can't.
But the way you incorporated the song....BRILLIANT! It was great!
Anyway, this was really REALLY good! Definitely a tragedy. Kudos to you for ending it when you did, though, because I have to have the "happy ending"....all of my stories do/will, at least. So bravo to you for doing what I can't.
But the way you incorporated the song....BRILLIANT! It was great!
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March 5, 2007 at 12:00 AM
Why you... Argh... It CAN'T END HERE!! THAT'S CRUEL!!
But I love it... it's... romantic ^^
But I love it... it's... romantic ^^
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March 5, 2007 at 12:00 AM
that story was so very sad. But it was also so very good. It was beautiful and while i hope you would have given it a happy ending it doesn't change that its good. But at least with where you ended it i can imagine my own extended version.
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March 5, 2007 at 12:00 AM
You're going to make me miserable! PLEASE WRITE MORE! I know you said you won't, but you always come out with fresh canon ideas! It was great! And a true tragedy without death!
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March 4, 2007 at 12:00 AM
I thought you did an amazing job. It really was tragic. I'm upset about that so tell your friend not to challenge you like that anymore. Thanks for not making it a long, drawn out torture. Will your next be more of a HEA? I hope so since those really are my favorites. It really was a great read though.
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March 4, 2007 at 12:00 AM
Hum - this is good! Actually sometimes an unhappy ending echoes more, and the setting perfectly fits all! BTW, I have come across too many fictions with caring but always losing Seamus, maybe this time can grant him the reward!
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March 4, 2007 at 12:00 AM
This can't be a one shot! Someday? What happens someday? What did Pansy mean by that? Gotta have more!