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for No one Comes When You cry

by ccino49

schedule July 5, 2007 at 12:00 AM
Ch. 25 - You messed up. You wrote: "Nina heard the conversation and sniggered to herself. Severus kicked her under the table as he glared at the students.
Sky kicked him back a bit harder and got up before he could retaliate." She can't be Nina and Sky both.
schedule July 1, 2007 at 12:00 AM
Up to Chapter 21

Okay... this is random, but I was thinking...
Is she ever going to return to the place where she was beaten and find out WHO was doing it? I want to know!
schedule July 1, 2007 at 12:00 AM
Chapter 22

Scratch last post... wow.......

And Voldemort's daughter. Did not see that one coming. I mean, I KIND of thought she would be related to him since he is the LAST desendent of Sal... but it didn't register I suppose.
schedule June 30, 2007 at 12:00 AM
Up to Chapter 18...

Yay! They are together! She finished her training! All is good... for now! lol

Love it, love it, love it!
person Miepje
schedule June 28, 2007 at 12:00 AM
Sybil is going to love Sky if she questions her prophesies! Not likely ^^ And I always have the urge to strangle Fudge...
Great chapter, so I hope you've found your muse again!
person Miepje
schedule June 27, 2007 at 12:00 AM
Ah... chocolat... mmm... I can certainly understand Severus' addiction, for I love dark chocolate (a lot!) too, but it's so funny to see Severus like that! *snicker* At least he won't try to nick her other, weirder, food. ^^
schedule June 27, 2007 at 12:00 AM
I really really like this story. I can't seem to stop reading it and each chapter is better than the last. Excellent work and i'm only on chapter 19, i am very excited to see what happens in the later chaptes. Commendable work.
person misslala
schedule June 27, 2007 at 12:00 AM
Damn Fudge hahaha I hope there are no hitches with this, but if there are, I know it is to progress the story :P Glad you are back! and I shall be looking for updates
schedule June 27, 2007 at 12:00 AM
Chapters 1-5

I have been reading about Lou, (and several other stories) and today I found myself with nothing to do and no new stories.

So I have come to this one.

Poor poor Sky... how did she not die in that cell... give up the will to live? Wow...

And Snape needs to get OVER himself... *rolls eyes*

After Lou's story, I was very inclined to beleive that the collar was to control her magic- but she was able to move those tree's... so now I'm just not sure. But very very curious.
schedule June 27, 2007 at 12:00 AM
Chapter 6 + 7

So... I was going to wait until I was done with chapter 10 to make another comment... but no... just couldn't do that.

I simply LOVE her getting taught by the four founders, it's a brilliant idea to get two years past very quickly, to teach her to speek and do magic... I LOOOOOVE it. BRILLIANT!

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