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I soooo need chapter 3! Fantastic beginning!

Wow...this seems a grand story opening, would you soon reveal more?

Yay! another veela story. I love them. The more possessive and jealous Draco the better.

This seems like an interesting start. Though you might want to get a proofreader "there" refers to place "their" is a possessive. I'd like to see more cross house couples, though. I just can't imagine that everyone would pair up so tidily. I mean, I can get the Gryffindors and Slytherins not dating each other, but why wouldn't they date Hufflepuffs and ravenclaws?