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I don't know whether I should say poor Harry or poor Draco.
Thanks for the great story.

wow hes angry but i need more!:)

update soon

Wow! I keep hoping they will get closer, so, we can get to the lovey dovey -happy part. But, they seem to get further apart and his friends are about to make it further.

Hopefully we can expect an update soon? I know I'm anxious about what's going on.

Hi!
When will you be updating?
It has been a very long time already!
I can't wait for the next chapter...

This is a wonderful story, but your spelling and grammar are throwing me off. If you need a beta I would love to help you out. I am anxious to see what happens between Harry and Draco.

hilfreak17@hotmail.com

Carrie

yes i'd like to see how they're getting together anyone ever raped me i'd try to kill not fall in love......................


~Ero

Sooo need chapter 22! See Draco isn't doing the right thing.... *sigh*

Hi!
Finally! An Update!!! Can't wait for the next update.
You should check the spelling. There are lots of spelling errors.

Example: "Fallowing Draco's lead, he was lead out of the diner, and away from the two raging woman."
It should be "Following" not "Fallowing"
"he was lead out of the dinner" It should be "He was led out"
"Led" is the past tense of "lead".
"from the two raging woman". It should be "from the two raging women".
Plural form of "woman" is "women". Just like "man" and "men".

I noticed that all your "follow", whether it is in past tense or if it ends with "ing", are spelled as "fallow".
The correct spelling is "follow" not "fallow".

Other than that... Great story line and I can't wait to know the ending.

Kathleen