rate_review Reviews

I'm so impressed with this story. Its fantastic. Ron's sure got some explaining to do. >:)

I hope you update this soon. It really is an excellent story and I look forward to your next chapter.

Yeah, you had me until that last paragraph. I despise Draco and I just don't understand why so many people seem to adore him. He just has no redeeming qualities whatsoever, he's a racist and a coward who doesn't even have the guts to act on his convictions, however wrong they may be. Don't get me wrong, I enjoyed the rest of your story, but to my way of thinking anyone who writes a Redeemed!Draco story isn't writing Draco, they're writing an OC who happens to be named Draco. I'm still going to keep reading this, mainly because you are a good writer and because I really want to see Harry explode when he walks in and finds Alithia in bed with Draco.

nice i'm still hocked

gaaahhhh i hate you ending the chapter like that lol you better update SOON!

I don't find Althia a enjoyable person, I really don't care for her so it's hard to feel much interest in her.

wow... great work keep it up

Loved it so far but I hated the formating on the last two chapters

o.o.. natural healer?.. Interesting!

*On the edge of her seat, and very hyper.* Who is at the door?!!!!!!! Whoisit, whoisit? Whoisit!??!!!

Interesting thou it doesnt seem anything new, We shall see thou.
Btw I like Stargate too.