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for Time Turned Fragile

by YamiBakura

schedule March 27, 2007 at 12:00 AM
Liked it! Would love to see more of it!
person Danine
schedule March 22, 2007 at 12:00 AM
I loved it! Harry's description was awesome! I'm imaginging this messed up pirate-type with a bit of spunk left no matter how badly he must look. L O V E D I T !
person Argo
schedule March 22, 2007 at 12:00 AM
Good piece of writing. "half-blind, limping Harry" sound like Moody - the leg and eye, just like his. I wonder if he is just as paranoid also.
person butterpie
schedule March 22, 2007 at 12:00 AM
Woah, great story, and scarily graphic in its depiction. Sad isn't it how they can be closer when one needs the others help isn't it. A shame its a one shot as I can see you expanding it into another multi-chapter storyline. Full of angst, and pathos, peppered with a gradual dawning of trust and friendship. Harry might end up as the next generations Mad Eye Moody. What a compeling work of art that would make. I sincerely hope you consider continuing, but if not thanks for the read.
person dark_samira
schedule March 22, 2007 at 12:00 AM
Oneshot?
Ahahahaha! You're funny!
Now stop joking and hurry up with chapter two.

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