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for Memoirs of a Serpent's Son

by Angelsfear

person misslala
schedule May 16, 2007 at 12:00 AM
You are close, It was the beginning of June when they fled Hogwarts, at least according to the Lexicon, trust me, I am using it well for one of my stories, LOL OMG this chapter was great! I can't wait to see Draco and Harry getting on! And well, getting it on as well, but the trust building and all that will brilliant! How many parts do you intend to write for this section, cause its bloody brilliant!!! :)

I don't want it to end, OMG, I don't want it to end, they are so alone and so, afraid, all of them really. I look forward to seeing them all Pay, the bastard Death Eaters!!!!!! ARGH! KEEP WRITING! ;0
schedule May 16, 2007 at 12:00 AM
It was really good. Sad once it got to the end. I can't wait for the next chapter.
schedule May 16, 2007 at 12:00 AM
Daft Fear, You certainly are good at making a person stressed out! What a place for a cliffhanger. Poor Draco, I hope he
person Danine
schedule May 16, 2007 at 12:00 AM
Ooh! I really liked this chapter! You're always too hard on yourself, it really fits well. Poor Draco has lost it, he's gone temporarily mad and that's to be completely understood. H8 Snape soooooo much. Hate hate. I really hope Draco's close to Privet Drive and just can't see through the fog.
person stasa
schedule May 16, 2007 at 12:00 AM
Don
person sunset20
schedule May 16, 2007 at 12:00 AM
OMG! OMG! He did it!! Oh, Draco I'm so not sure if this was the right decision. (yeah I still want to trust Severus) But Harry will find him, he'll be an asshole to DRaco, but gradually it will change and then all will be ok... right? please tell me Draco will be ok!!! *hugs Draco*

(BTW, I love your story - yes, I guess that's obvious - I think it's even better than the original, partly because of your writing style, which is so personal and full of emotions, and partly because it's from DRaco's POV - no I DON'T like Harry, sorry for that :D And to be honest I'm much more excited about your version of book 7 than the "real" one, so keep posting :D)
person sunset20
schedule May 16, 2007 at 12:00 AM
Sorry, just one more thing... random guess, is that thingie that Draco got from his mum a Horcrux? I bet it is! Oh and he's near Grimmauld's place, right? - but he can't see it because it's hidden or something - oh, I soooooooooo don't remember book 5 *hides in shame* only those parts that have also been mentioned in your story *giggles* - told you it was better that the original :D
person RYoung
schedule May 15, 2007 at 12:00 AM
Great concept, the whole journal thing it a fantastic idea. Very well written piece and very in character. Just wondering if you'll re-write the 7th book parts when the actual book is launched.
person misslala
schedule May 15, 2007 at 12:00 AM
OMG that was wonderful!!!! :) I can't wait to see what happens and who knocked him out and if Harry finds him! OOOOOOOO I can't wait! This is so cool!
schedule May 15, 2007 at 12:00 AM
Where did they drop him off? Sooo need chapter 31!

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