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November 20, 2008 at 12:00 AM
the last few chapters have kept on the edge of my seat. i hope you will update soon. Interesting twist making Poppy the villain. are Draco and Neville going to fight over Charlie? Please let Neville win he deserves to be happy.
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November 19, 2008 at 12:00 AM
Darkless here! (finally managed to log into my original account, completely by accident. I'm totally cluless there. Hehehe)
Anyhoo...as much as the story flip-flops between the present and the past (and the headers for each change helps immesurably) the story flows well, has managed to keep quite intense, and you're still pulling amazing plot-twists out of your hat!
Your Poppy/Polla is demented and sadistic. When you get that combination mixed with sexual gratification, you get someone who needs more and more just to 'get off' and becomes an extremely dangerous and unpredictible person. I just hope her specter hanging over you, demanding you write her story lets you sleep sometimes. I had an vicious villian that wouldn't leave me alone until I had it down on paper. They take on a life of their own, so don't apologize for what they do in the story. Readers may think that you are responsible, but until they write a story themselves, they will never understand. One must almost has to write it just to purge the villian from one's psyche. *rolls eyes*
The smex is intense too. My only question there is; why do Harry and Severus seem to be so knowledgeable about what they do with each other --in the past-- instead of being the fumbling teenagers they really are? Even if Sev has some experience, I doubt Harry does. They are, after all, only 17.
Again, hurrah for the plot-twists and for nicely full chapters! I hope to see more in the near future. I gotta know what's gonna happen next!!!
Anyhoo...as much as the story flip-flops between the present and the past (and the headers for each change helps immesurably) the story flows well, has managed to keep quite intense, and you're still pulling amazing plot-twists out of your hat!
Your Poppy/Polla is demented and sadistic. When you get that combination mixed with sexual gratification, you get someone who needs more and more just to 'get off' and becomes an extremely dangerous and unpredictible person. I just hope her specter hanging over you, demanding you write her story lets you sleep sometimes. I had an vicious villian that wouldn't leave me alone until I had it down on paper. They take on a life of their own, so don't apologize for what they do in the story. Readers may think that you are responsible, but until they write a story themselves, they will never understand. One must almost has to write it just to purge the villian from one's psyche. *rolls eyes*
The smex is intense too. My only question there is; why do Harry and Severus seem to be so knowledgeable about what they do with each other --in the past-- instead of being the fumbling teenagers they really are? Even if Sev has some experience, I doubt Harry does. They are, after all, only 17.
Again, hurrah for the plot-twists and for nicely full chapters! I hope to see more in the near future. I gotta know what's gonna happen next!!!
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November 19, 2008 at 12:00 AM
Oh, it feels like Harry is about to return to the Future soon ^_^ I wonder what's Poppy got in mind with all those potions, that has the professors so worked up along with the Order of the Phoenix?
Please update chapter 27 soon ^_^
Jan
Please update chapter 27 soon ^_^
Jan
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November 19, 2008 at 12:00 AM
awww *tears* for harry.
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November 16, 2008 at 12:00 AM
something is wrong with chapter 26 and is hard to read. please repost.
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November 4, 2008 at 12:00 AM
Oh Gods, I feel so bad for Sevy! I can't wait for Harry to return ^_~
Poor Neville, having a psycho for a half sister sucks! I hope she's taken care of soon... preferably before she has that baby, no child deserves a bitch for a mother! I get the impression that Percy is up to something, and is not as good as we might think, am I right? Is he good or bad?
Please update chapter 25 soon ^_^
Jan
Poor Neville, having a psycho for a half sister sucks! I hope she's taken care of soon... preferably before she has that baby, no child deserves a bitch for a mother! I get the impression that Percy is up to something, and is not as good as we might think, am I right? Is he good or bad?
Please update chapter 25 soon ^_^
Jan
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October 21, 2008 at 12:00 AM
keep goin! i like it!
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September 2, 2008 at 12:00 AM
I totally love this story and I can't wait to read the chapter but I just have to ask um, when did they take the cock ring off?
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September 2, 2008 at 12:00 AM
I love this story so much ^_^ I can't wait to read more! Do you have an updates list? If you do could please add me and email me when there is a new chapter? My email is bubbles5166@hotmail.com
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August 11, 2008 at 12:00 AM
I don't know what else to say, this story is bloody brilliant and I am hooked like a smoker to nicotine! I can't wait to read more, perhaps going a little more into the detail of Poppy Pomfrey; the whole thing with her has been here and there but theres not much reason for her turning evil. I get the whole "she hates Harry" bit that made perfect sense but she can't have just turned evil with a snap of her fingers. I dunno I guess I just feel like its missing something with her. I like the fact that you have started adding times (like; Present - Monday Morning) because it makes it a lot easier to understand where the changes are, especially since people like Remus, Severus, Albus (and now Lily, James and Sirius) are part of the Past and Present.
Please email me when you update; gypsy_willow90@hotmail.com
Please email me when you update; gypsy_willow90@hotmail.com