rate_review Reviews

I really like this story...it's romantic and at the same time, has heat that is appealing. You've got a really nice touch with the characters and in particular, with Hermione and her love for Harry. Good job!

One criticism is that you need a proofreader - as I caught a couple of errors that should have been cleaned up before posting.

Regards,

the_scribbler

omg to have the love of a man like that i would die a happy woman. that was beautiful pairing harry and hermione are so right for each other. i hope that you will continue writing stories.

i really enjoyed this story it was well written

please update soon

This was a really good oneshot. I'm usually not much of a Harry/Hermione fan unless they've got Draco in the mix. ;) But I really enjoyed reading it. Loved the Ron bashing. Hehehe...it's good to see writers pull away from the typical canonness of certain characters. And making Ron a playboy did just that.

Kudos to you and I hope to read more of your woke soon.


*kisses*

This would be a nice story if it wasn't for the rather weak arguement that kicked it all off. Ron's defense that Hermione cannot get a date is nowhere near strong enough for his friends to think him a changed person who doesn't care about them. Hermione had just been nagging and yelling at him, quite a bit, and he is called the bad guy for just one arguement. It just doesn't work. Just get rid of the whole "Ron has changed so much" arguement, change the fight a bit so that he actually says something worth getting angry about, and this story would be thumbs-up. :)