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Well then,
That's alrightt.
I always seem to forget things when I'm writingg,
If I notice anything else,
I'll tell youu so youu could work it into the story or something.
It does make sense that they would get back together,
Being together everydayy for a whole summer,
It's actually a wonder it took them that long to have sex l0l.
But anywayss,
Great chapter.
I'm hoping Draco can find a way to convince Hermione about what happened,
I'm guessing it'll end up being like a penseive thingg probablyy,
That might make sense,
But then again,
Youu probablyy have a better idea
But if youu don't,
Go rightt ahead && use mine.
I know I can alwayss use suggestions.
Thnxx for updatingg so quickly too,
Perhaps youu could do it again ?

Much Love...
XXX
Xx-.k.a.y.y.-xX

i know i have those same fears about snape, but we can all hope for the best even if it never happens-beside that is one great advatage to having fanfiction! :) well i am sorry about you not knowing for sure where you want to go from here but i will add my two cents worth in essance to hopfully help. you could have draco get help from severus and some way have him endding up talking to mcganall and them trying to retreve the memories from hermione. or... having hermione end up going to poppy for some reason and will there you go i hope that it gets your juices flowing and you will know what you want to do. (you DO NOT need to use my ideas but if they help you feel free to use them!) well i will be waiting for your update-so dont worry about time. :)

I think your story is great, I have not found many lately on here that I like. Please hurry and post the next chapter. Do you have any other suggestion on other good stories on here for me? If you email me back please put something in the subject field so I know it is you. I get so much juck mail I normally just delete, delete delete.

this story is awesome. I kinda feel bad for you that you havent got more reviews cuz its really so good and you have a totally different plot than anything ive ever read. its got sex, drama, angst, and even cute moments too, and it's totally believable. I mean i dout jkr would ever write something like this but technically it could happen. And your sorting song wasnt even bad, it rhymed! So i thought i would review, and i NEVER review. So please people if i can review you can! i want you to continue with this story and i hope you are thinking of new ideas as i write this.

Great story so far, I can't wait to see the next chapter.

good update.
will she accidently find the letter?
waiting for more.

I am really liking this story.
It's believable,
Which is kinda rare with this coupling
&& so far it's gone very well with books 1 through 6 (except Harry && Ginny's breakup at the end of the last book, but perhaps youu can fit in how they got back together or if they're ust hiding their relationship or something).
I also like the refreshing plot line,
As I have never read anything similar to this yett.
It also seems as youu are a quick updater,
Which is again,
A plus.
I do hope youu will continue this story as I really want to know what going to happen next.
I can tell Hermione && Draco's relationship will more then likely progress slowly,
Which I like && know will add to the believability.
I kinda feel sorry for Draco though because since Hermione's memory was obliviated,
He's going to have to not only convince her that they had sex (willingly as well !)
But that Voldemort raped her && she is pregnant with either his or Draco's baby.
Poor guy.
One thing that did bother me, however was that in the first few chapters,
It was spaced out all wierd like every line was a new paragraph.
Perhaps youu could fix that for when in the future, others start reading your storyy.
Please,
Do update soon,
I really want to know what's goingg to happen next !

Much Love...
XXX
Xx-.k.a.y.y.-xX

THANK YOU! for i think my skin might have started to crawl. (gives a shutter~) well i do look forward to the next chapter as always. ;) also i wonder when draco will realse that she has had her memory taken and will it spure draco to do something about the situation? one more question is severus a good guy in this story i cant remember. (also thank you for your kind words they made me smile :) -also hope you are doing well. my aleriges are terrible! kept cool now that summer weather has decided to rear its ugly head.-sticks tounge out-)

What did he do?! Ohhh, I hate cliffies *whines*...but I love them as well...Hmmm Draco, doing something rash...that's a pretty out of character trait, he must be really affected by Hermione..too bad she's been obliviated. Will he figure it out?!! I need more!! Oh the torture...

Great job! I love this story and am excited to see where it goes. I hope Draco gets to be a daddy... keep up the updates and I'll be a happy camper!!

I do believe we have a love/hate relationship madame. I love you for writing the fic but I'm beginning to strongly dislike your passion for cliff-hanger endings. You've got a great writing style and I can't wait to see how it all unfolds - Hermione discovering a pregnancy, finding out that Draco is the father ... which he must be!, and how Ron will react! Ah glorious.