rate_review Reviews

I love it! Funny and who knew bonding could be so kinky. I'm so looking forword to the next chapter.

This is a great story. It's well-written and compelling. However, I'm uncomfortable with the censorship that took place. Putting a writer in the position where they feel compelled to self-censor really isn't much of an improvement on forced censorship.

This is the ADULTfanfiction.net, right? This is where there are thousands of other stories to read if one is displeased with the story one is reading. I cannot understand the snarking you got - it certainly wasn't literary criticism. I did find it interesting that those who have a huge issue with imaginary B&D, apparently have none with equally imaginary paedophelia.

Anyway, nevermind. If you feel you must continue posting two versions of every chapter, I suppose it's up to you. I think it's uncalled for and most unfortunate. I will, however, continue to be an avid reader of this story and of any other other story you'd care to post.

I'm very disappointed in some of the readers here at AFF.

Thyrsday 14th June.
Hi. Thank you for all your wonderful reviews. I just feel compelled to say that those who were not happy with some of the chapters did not ask me to remove or alter them in any way. They only said it was not for them and would not read further. It was my own decision to put in revised chapters for them, (not that they were very well revised, I'm not very good at that kind of thing. lol) No one actual critisised me outright for what I wrote and I will continue to write in my own way. I welcome all reviews and opinions from readers, regardless of what they say, it's just that the best ones are....well....better. I admit I don't always think to put warnings at the beginings of me chapters, then again, if you bought a book from a shop you would not find warnings on those chapters and that is I suppose the premise on which I write. Can't help itt, It's how I am. Please all keep reading and reviewing. I will try to put up a few chapters tonight because I will be out of the loop for a few days because of personal things. Will resume as soon as possible.
ccino.

hahahaha It must be fun writing a 15 year old character! LOL God I remember when "dick and fart jokes" were funny, lol Sometimes they still are, but depends on the situation and who says it and I'm 24! LOL They are both in for a rude awakening, lol I can't believe that they have it so hard, but I am sure nothing less comes from volide! What a piss poor idea indeed.

i look forward to seeing what happens once they get passed all the initial stuff and she is doing better about not disobeying or actually has the hang of it. Poor girl. Why does Severus all end up with willful women?

Just so you know - i like your story just the way it was. please update soon!

I wont say I "enjoyed" the original versions better but, well, they were a lot more powerful. You have a great talent for evoking strong emotions. I have to say the toned down versions do not pack the same punch. It is really a great read. I am hooked!

Life is really sucking for Lou right now. I surely wouldn't want to be her. Hopefully this time will go fast for her, and she can get it right, and not have to be punished all of the time. I surely hope that this all will not make her really hate Severus, and have long term effects on her feelings for him.
Sansa

Yay! Now everyone is happy!

I think the story is lost a bit. It would be better to see when Lou fight back, without being beaten. It would better if she go to the muggle world, be happy and let Severus and Dumbledore fight there own battle. ANd let her enjoy her money and develope her skills.

P.S.S. It wasn't distressing to me at least. (I read my last comment and think it might have something to do with you taking the chapters down- if not... I am vain I suppose). It was good... I suppose my comment sounded like I was upset by it when really- I was upset for Lou. When I am reading a good story or watching a movie- I get the emotions that the main characters is feeling (and sometimes the facal exspressions) and thats because I am a theature girl. But yeah, if this had anything to do with my comment- know that after I read it and made my comment, I got up and went and talked to my mom about my graduation- no emotional scars. Just the comments after reading a GOOD (perfect the way it is) story.


I'm done now...