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for Core Pursuit

by GryffindorToy

person Dark Angel
schedule October 25, 2007 at 12:00 AM
I do hope you plan on adding another chapter soon. I'm quickly losing patients with you.
person Dark Angel
schedule October 23, 2007 at 12:00 AM
I finally finish part one and come to find that part two is only one chapter long!?! *furious* I hope you get to writing soon because I was REALLY getting into that story! *fuming* PLEASE finish the next chapter, and SOON. I can't possibly wait THAT long you know. *slowling regaining composure* The story was really good though (key word was since you haven't finished). *glares menacingly at the computer screen* Anyway, I hope to read more of Core Pursuit VERY soon might I add. *gives the computer another good glare*
person Dark Angel
schedule October 23, 2007 at 12:00 AM
Sorry if I was a little offensive in any way. Just so you know, I only got angry because the story was so good. You are very talented. I expressed my own interest in writing my own story in another review. It might have even been in part 1. I'm not sure. I just don't know HOW to put a story on this site (or any other site for that matter). Now that I have apologized enough, PLEASE update soon!
schedule October 7, 2007 at 12:00 AM
This is really good. GOOD JOB and WRITE MORE SOON!
schedule September 20, 2007 at 12:00 AM
When are the other chapters going up?
please email me with updates at poohnation74@yahoo.com. thanks.
person anniea
schedule September 14, 2007 at 12:00 AM
aaaaaaaaahhhhhhhhh the pillow wars loving it. and loving all of your stories. please update soon and if possible can i get an email when you update *kisses*
person Melanie
schedule September 3, 2007 at 12:00 AM
Hey, I just read Latent and I immediately came and looked for Core Pursuit after I was finished. It's really a good plot and all. Can't wait till the next chapter's up ^..^ Anyway, Great Story, Bye.
person Anon
schedule August 25, 2007 at 12:00 AM
cool loved latent love'n this one sofar too
person darrena
schedule August 23, 2007 at 12:00 AM
Yay!! Brilliant chapter. Looking forward to more. :)
person hyunyung.wingles@gmail.com
schedule July 21, 2007 at 12:00 AM
awwwwwwwwwwwwww
i wish u'd update this
it's been years and years and years and years!
=(

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