rate_review Reviews

I am so glad to see a story with an abundance of humor. Draco Malfoy in baby garb saying momma to his wife was hilarious. It came as a bit of a disappointment when Ginny and Molly died. I understand why you did it, because other wise your story would have ended or gone dry. Both of them was to much though, especially for Harry. He has always wanted a family he is about ready to have one and then instantly losing the one he is gaining as well as the only one he has known. You said it yourself when you said Molly was the glue of the family, she was everyones mother. No one ever took her place and Ginny would have done that beautifully and without a mother for the Weasley clan at the end you feel like the big Weasley family doesn't exist anymore. I love the way Draco and Harry become friends and their respective positions at hogwarts it is extremely fitting. I am disappointed by Hermione's placement at the end of the story. She is an extremely brilliant witch and you make a point of saying this about her but she helps her husbands business, which is really depressing. You expect her to do something great and not be the one to end up pregnant so early on. (She is my favorite character, which is probably why I am being so harsh). I applaud you for your use of Parkinson. Not only were you bold enough to use her and use her as a good person, you did it most intelligently. I love the fact that Molly was the prankster and again the the humor in your story was so refreshing it was nice to not have such a dark, which is usually so prevelent in Harry Potter fanfiction.

Thank You writing this and for reading my long review. I wouldn't write such a long review if I didn't love it.

-Myth

I think Id like a small sequel. It doesn't have to be alot of chapters just a few. I really enjoyed this story and don't want it to end just yet. I think that Ron deserves to have at least one son and maybe include some of the 'friendly' compatioion going on between Harry and Draco. Also some more of Fred and Pansy's kinky sex life. I think Fred and Pansy and Hermine and George are my favorite couples.

omg!!! u have to do a sequel, wow. i love fanfiction, like absolutley totally love it, i kno its stupid an probly pathetic, but i cant help it, an ive only found two other stories since i started reading that i love as much as this story, when molly an ginny died, i will admit i almost cried, how u write is amazing, u have to do a sequel, pllleeeeeeeeeeeeeeaaseee do a sequel, an if u do, lemme no by email, i will so read that, ur amazing with ur stories, i love this one expescially, amazing an not that over the top. thanx for writing this. an thanx if u write the sequel. please email me if u do. draco_luvr1018@yahoo.com. sincerely, Samantha.

well your story walked me through my dinner and an entire bag of goldfish snacks... which is to say that im a pig, but despite this i was not distracted from your story which is to say if your writing had be inferior i would not have been able to read it while distracted. I'm really not a fat chick i just ate one meal today ( at 10pm... yikes thats so unhealthy) anyways back to the story I like that fred orders Parkinson around but with the wedding stuff he was too commanding it was almost abusive which is a bit out of character. That relationship needs more playfulness. Hermonie and George are a great couple though.

just for the record..his name is GRAWP ..not GWARP

You know when I first saw that this story was 41 chapters long I was reluctant to read it, usually reading a story that long is tiring and tedious. But you did a really good job and kept the chapters short and to the point. I like your writing style and how you describes each character in the canon manner. I for one would like to see you write a sequel maybe one that focuses more on George and Hermione or even a second generation one where it focuses on the children of the original characters.

Anyway well done and I hope to see more!

I'd Love a sequel!

I would more than love a sequal, I have no Idea how old this story is only that I want to read more.

Sasha

I would love to read more on it

I finally finished this story, and I love it! I love how you developed all of the characters and made them funny at the same time. The humor in this story was fantastic, especially the baby scene between Draco and Harry...i am glad to see that they became friends as well.