rate_review Reviews

I really like this story alot. Can you please write some more chapters?

So Hermione has the hots for Barty Crouch...... great twisted story here!

A really unusual pairing- at least I haven't seen it done! I thought the transition from attempted rape to Hermoine wanting a cigarette was hilarious. I would love to read the in between some day. Thanks for a delightful read and for the only review I expect I'll ever get for my Pansy/Ginny short.

I just had to stop in and tell you how good your story is while I was checking my own and it does seem to feel a little empty between 5 and 6 but it's so good!

Hi,
I like this story. It has very interesting plot potential, but are you missing a chapter between 5 and 6. I can see how we can get to chapter 6 because you have subtle hits that Hermione could find this man attractive, but it is a bit of a leap just to put us there, right? If you don't want to write the sex you don't have to but do you think you could write the scene in emotional/plot terms were it stops being rape and starts being Hermione takes on a new lover. I don't mean this to be rude because I do like the story. Keep up the good work, thnks for updating so fast!

Thank you for the review! Hmm, I was going for a shocking "wow, I can't believe that happened!" vibe when I purposefully left out the sex scene, but I can see your point---it might be a little jolting for some readers to go from point A to point B without any clue as to what happened in between the two events. Maybe I'll write the "missing" scene and include it a little later as an addendum. Watch for it, I'll dedicate it to you =)