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August 25, 2007 at 12:00 AM
I really like this story alot. Can please write some more chapters?
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May 26, 2007 at 12:00 AM
Looking forward to seeing where this is going to go.
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May 26, 2007 at 12:00 AM
Wow! I really like this please update soon.
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May 26, 2007 at 12:00 AM
Very good start, my only advice is what my beta gave me. "Paint a picture with words", meaning incorperate as much detail as you can, involving the senses. excellent start.