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for For Cloud 646

by vladfannyc

schedule June 3, 2007 at 12:00 AM
Why are your chapters so short??? It took me a whole 2 minutes to read both chapters. I am not saying that it is a bad begining, but you could have put both chapters into one. Well keep up the good work and update again.
kat
schedule June 2, 2007 at 12:00 AM
Why did he stray? Why would he stray? What is this plan? I soooo need chapter 2! And Draco! What has he been doing?
person Annie
schedule June 2, 2007 at 12:00 AM
Oh! Stupid Harry. I liked the image of Draco throwing ash on Harry's face. ^.^ Can't wait for more!
person Cloud646
schedule June 2, 2007 at 12:00 AM
wow, lol, i seriously just created an account for the soul purpose of reviewing this. Thank you for doing this fic, i honestly didn't think anyone would...especially since i missread the original topic and therefore put this request up on accident lol, but really i like how this is starting out and i look forward to what you personally decide to do with the idea. lol, thanks again, and keep up the good work.

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