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June 9, 2007 at 12:00 AM
Wow,
Poor Severus.. This is off to a great start. I can see this going two ways for Severus and Harry getting together both with Harry needing Severus back to keep the school running.
1 Harry's sees his error
2 Harry forces Severus into helping him and more.
Ofcourse for an angsty story the second is more interesting, but I hope he gets his due in the end then..;-)
Keep on the good work. (I like daimons to, but it is more romatic then I like. this one has the making of being great!)
Poor Severus.. This is off to a great start. I can see this going two ways for Severus and Harry getting together both with Harry needing Severus back to keep the school running.
1 Harry's sees his error
2 Harry forces Severus into helping him and more.
Ofcourse for an angsty story the second is more interesting, but I hope he gets his due in the end then..;-)
Keep on the good work. (I like daimons to, but it is more romatic then I like. this one has the making of being great!)
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June 9, 2007 at 12:00 AM
I think Harry desperately needs to get his butt kicked, preferably by someone or something he can't reason with. How about the Bloody Baron?
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June 6, 2007 at 12:00 AM
very very good chapter but i hope
harry becomes friendly soon
bye bye
harry becomes friendly soon
bye bye
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June 6, 2007 at 12:00 AM
So our poor Severus will continue to be tortured for awhile and Potter will continue to be such an ass. I want so bad for his true colors to come to light and begin his downfall. How as I said before will this become a Severus/Potter story??? Keep it coming I am hooked.
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June 6, 2007 at 12:00 AM
I'm a little torn about this story. Primarily because Harry is not simply being a jackass, he's being truly evil in his vindictiveness (I'm sure I'm not only reader who feels that). He honestly is acting like a spoilt child, not only with Snape but in his job as well. (He was going to fire the entire staff and appoint all his friends?). And yet nobody really cares.He really needs a very thorough talking to, and maybe proffessional help.
Snape's aid to everyone on the other hand seems a wee bit ooc, but okay.
I'm honestly wondering how you're ever going to get Harry into our (and Snape's) good graces again. The story is intruiging and I do hope you continue it, if only to see Haary get his commeupance, or whatever you decide to do.
Snape's aid to everyone on the other hand seems a wee bit ooc, but okay.
I'm honestly wondering how you're ever going to get Harry into our (and Snape's) good graces again. The story is intruiging and I do hope you continue it, if only to see Haary get his commeupance, or whatever you decide to do.
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June 6, 2007 at 12:00 AM
Poor Severus, he's lost everything and Harry's making sure his life is hell.
What's with Harry anyway? He seems a really cruel bastard, I know he hates Snape but I think he's gone too far. *Grrr*
Great story, I'm looking forward to the next chapter! :D
What's with Harry anyway? He seems a really cruel bastard, I know he hates Snape but I think he's gone too far. *Grrr*
Great story, I'm looking forward to the next chapter! :D
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June 5, 2007 at 12:00 AM
Damn, Harry really is a little shit. I do hope he realizes how wrong he is about Severus and that he gets taken down several notches. Excellent work!!~Sophia
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June 5, 2007 at 12:00 AM
Is there any light at the end of the tunnel for Severus? I mean I'm crying for the guy here. Harry should be the one to rot in that cell. I hope things begin to get better for our Severus.
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June 5, 2007 at 12:00 AM
I don't know if I want to love it or hate it. It is well writtin and I enjoyed Severus' view but Harry's being an ass. Will he be one all the way through or will he get kick off his high horse. I hope he gets kicked off soon. I am interested to see where this is going.
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June 5, 2007 at 12:00 AM
very very very good keep going and
post soooooooooooooooooooooooooon
bye bye
post soooooooooooooooooooooooooon
bye bye