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June 11, 2007 at 12:00 AM
love your pen name BTW, i am too :)
anyhow great beginning to your story, i do wish it was longer, but your reasoning in your AN is justifiable.
maybe next time you could leave teh reader wanting to read more, im not so sure that is what happened here.
good job though! sounds like it will be interesting
anyhow great beginning to your story, i do wish it was longer, but your reasoning in your AN is justifiable.
maybe next time you could leave teh reader wanting to read more, im not so sure that is what happened here.
good job though! sounds like it will be interesting